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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 07:18 CDT
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Good chapter. I wonder who the next victim was going to be? Yugi maybe or a little one? I wonder who the body belongs to maybe the cop that was kidnapped. I hope they get Pharaoh off. It seems not many will miss Aknadin.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:30 CDT
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Good chapter. Poor Joey, how awful to find the bodies that way. I'm glad Yugi won't see or hear any of this before he's prepared.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 18:57 CDT
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Oh god poor Joey! fancy finding that when your not prepared! and I'm glad they are keeping Yugi out of the courtroom...What another cliffie...you get worse!! but the speed your writing this we won't have to wait too long. This story seems to be flowing.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 09:22 CDT
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Good chapter. Mrs. Moutou is becoming very likeable to me. I love the way she is now and I'm glad she got over whatever was bugging her about them. Yugi and Pharaoh are just adoreable together. I know Yugi will help the Pharaoh deal with his past.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 16:40 CDT
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Wow!! these are coming thick and fast...don't you ever sleep? (just kiddin'). Poor Pharaoh I hope Yugi can see through his past when he's told about it, and I'm glad Mika's finally found compassion in her heart so that she can help the pharaoh. Shame about the cliffie *pouts* What did Kaiba find?? More please
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 03:49 CDT
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Great chapter. We are finding out about their pasts and finding help for Pharaoh. I wonder if he was behind the whole kidnapping thing to use all of them in porn tapes. Sounds like that one cop is in on it in someway. I love it.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 03:39 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad she is going all out on this. If she works hard I'm sure she will find out allthe answers including the kidnapping mystery. You brought Akenadin in for a hot minute to be a murder victim, but I think it was probably self defense, not murder.
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 02:22 CDT
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do you sleep,you update like 3 chapters today....
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, sorry, sorry. I haven't reviewed before now but I thought I'd leave it a couple of chapters (hope you don't mind) I like the way this story is progressing, with all the twists and turns...I'm glad Mika is starting to trust everyone to the extent of having them help her clear Pharaoh's name...its a shame it took such a sad tale to alter her opinion. More please
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 03:16 CDT
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OOH! Exciting chapter! I hope they don't hurt Pharaoh. I think they have got more than they can handle with him though. He seems really strong. I hope they can get him back. Mika is really starting to understand.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 23:50 CDT
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Good chapter. I wonder what those kidnappers are after. I hope they are not harming those that they kidnap. Those two care about each other so much. It's funny to see Paharaoh worrying about Yugi and Yugi worrying about him. They are first in each others thoughts.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 00:03 CDT
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Great chapter. I thought it was the police following them around but it's someone who wants to harm them. A reincarnation of Aknadin, maybe? Anyway great story, I'm glad Pharaoh has such great reflexes.
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Title: cliffy!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 19:58 CDT
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ohhhh i can't wait to see who the guy is?! who is stalking yami! i must now!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 08:30 CDT
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Good chapter. Mika is really nice except when it comes to the humaniums and animials (sp?) I wonder what her problem is. Does she think that they tried to harm Yugi when he was small? Who knows perhaps it is just a phobia.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 08:18 CDT
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Good chapter. They are all working really hard to make Pharaoh comfortable. I wonder what is wrong with Yuugi's mother. This is just so good.
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