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Reviewed By: readtoescape [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2010 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOur work is amazing. It draws you in right away, and you can *feel* what the characters are feeling. Your depiction of squall ans siefer in this fic and in the protectiong the lion story are just incredible. I cannogt *wait* for another chanpter of Defning Love. Eagerly awaiting a notice of update.... thank you - |
Reviewed By: love it! On: July 25, 2010 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is definitely one of my favorite fanfictions. I absolutely love the characters and the story! I know it is coming close to the end, so I am hoping you tie up things nicely. Thanks for such a great read! Can't wait until the next chapter. =]
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Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2010 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is completely engrossing, I love your writing style as well. When I came to the last chapter (45) I was so sad. I certainly can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: yay X3
Reviewed By: KojiNokemono On: October 05, 2009 16:35 EDT
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Well, even so, regardless of how longwinded it it, I enjoy your writing. You also write realistically and develop the characters to an outstanding level. Atop that is that, while the plot line itself could very easily and quickly be summed up, it still makes for a good read, even if it's fanfiction. If, or perhaps I should say when? you become published, I would be very interested in reading romantic homosexual stories. While yaoi/yuri is good, especially between already made characters, I think the world could use some well written and well adapted homosexual stories, explicit or otherwise. Also, I haven't looked or searched yet but do you have your own site for your work? Or, do you have somewhere I can keep in better contact/updates, such as deviantart?
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Reviewed By: me On: July 15, 2009 00:10 EDT
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abortion by t-rex, that's one way to solve a problem :) i am glad we are not going to have to endure a 9mos prego Squall - mainly b/c he only just discovered his blossoming side as a 'lover' and we all know babies kill the passion like nuthin else. Seifer is just comin around to liking Lore, so it would really suck to have him run off now. lucky for squall, he doesn't seem to have suffered with any crazy-makin hormones. i look forward to the next bits!!!
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Reviewed By: BabaBlackSheep On: July 14, 2009 15:28 EDT
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I was waiting for this to come out! Oh how happy this chappie makes me >,
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: Koji_Nokemono On: July 14, 2009 15:25 EDT
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yay ^W^ *giggles at Diablo snuffling Squall* I know I've said it before but I love your character devleopment :) Every update keeps me just as interested, and while yes, smut is/can be good, I like your stories just as much for playing hard to get and adding new twists ^ ^ I look very much forward to your next chapter :B :)
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Title: hurray!
Reviewed By: me On: June 03, 2009 20:52 EDT
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oh my gosh! what a camp fire conversation. lol - oh that Dannis - he's a troublemaker! i am excited to read more!!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING :)
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Reviewed By: me too On: May 24, 2009 18:49 EDT
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update soon please!!! love this story - can't wait to read what happens next
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Title: an update! yay!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: me On: April 27, 2009 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story - and this chapter has me so excited to read more. Dannis sounds like a good bad boy! doncha hate it when Seifer is right? ;) lol CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT BIT!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Koji_Nokemono On: April 14, 2009 16:58 EDT
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I think I've rated you enough times to let you know I look very forward to your updates :) As always I am glad that they're both so stubborn XD it's nice to have human elements in the fiction, and no matter how much you might want it to be finished, I am glad too that you take the time to consider all the little details that matter and make it such a good story. I commend you on your work and hope that spring doesn't make you too lazy, or your work/classes etc make you too busy :3 Take care and I look forward to your updates ^ ^
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Reviewed By: BeccaBear3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 22:41 EDT
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This is one of my most favorite stories on this site. Please put up more! *lip quiver* I can't get no satisfaction until you finish it. Then I'll be sad cause it's over. XD
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Reviewed By: me On: February 26, 2009 20:23 EST
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faithfully waiting for an update :)
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Reviewed By: Onee-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me tell this first!! I only just finished reading chapter 24 right now! but I thought it would be a good idea to write a review now (you'll get another one when I reach the newest chapter ^_^). I love this story so far! even if it goes awfully slow sometimes I actually enjoy exactly that fact. It's really nice that you don't seem to rush into getting squall and seifer together. even though it's frustrating sometimes ^^' And I actually like Cale (I normally don't like characters that don't belong to the original story). Lore is a bit too obsessed with his father. I know it's his role so it's fine (of course), it's just that if I ever met someone like him I just know he would annoy the crap outa me... but he's fun while he's in the same room with seifer :D Another thing that I like about your story is that a lot of things don't go as expected (in a good way... I'm just not so good at explaining such things... let's just say I love stories that hold surprises and unexpected scenes). Enough of my babbling... I hope to read much more of this!! ^__^ keep up the great work, will you?!
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: January 12, 2009 22:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished the chapter, its good ^.^. It looks like there is some new rising action to throw in some suspense/action along with the romance. I think it'll be an interesting turn of events. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: January 12, 2009 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I read this new chapter - I just want to say THANK YOU for updating. I really look forward to this chapter and I'll leave some feedback after I'm done reading. Thanks and good luck!
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 00:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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aah i always look forward to your updates. :) they're both so adorable and awkward.
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Title: thank god!
Reviewed By: nutty_youare not logg in On: October 26, 2008 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wohoo u updated again! im so glad! no one seems to be updating anything anymore, guess its exams and stuff. anyway i enjoyed reading this chapter, even though there was no man loving 0.o ur writing is a jooooy to read, so please update again soon. and good luck with all ur university stuff or wateva.
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Title: i really need an update!!
Reviewed By: update!!!! On: September 30, 2008 21:14 EDT
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i keep hoping there is a new installment - want more! i am not usually into mpreg but this is well done! (especially since you skipped over the preg years - wee!) more please!!!
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Reviewed By: gracespradlin On: July 27, 2008 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic. :) I must admit I've never played FF8, but I was able to follow this story easily. I'm a hardcore FF7 fan, and this has piqued my interest in checking out FF8. You deal with the idea of male pregnancy very delicately. I love this story.
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Title: weooooooooo
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! ur not dead! u updated! im happy! hmmm hum. yeah liked this chapter. erm...yeah.looking forward to ur next update!dont sstay away for 2 long! sorry i suck at writing reviews, im retarded (erm im not actually retarded-retarded, just in case u think i am, im just stupid) :o
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Title: an update!!!!!
Reviewed By: me! On: June 30, 2008 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh joyous day! I am so glad to have something to read -this chapter was great! can't wait for next. should make for an akward time w/ Lore tagging along and Raijin trying to get his point accross to Squall - ha! looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: June 27, 2008 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it as always---I'm amazed how you managed to do a 180 with the situation. I consider this the most fruitful hour that I've spent. (It took me an hour to read this chapter three times so that the wait time until the next chapter seems shorter. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Takayu (didn't log in) On: June 27, 2008 11:00 EDT
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^_^ Another chapter, another 20 or so minutes of my life I couldn't have spent better. Ugh...time does go by fast, too fast. It seems like only a month ago I was a new little freshman...and now...now I'm gonna be a senior. I can't say I'm not excited though. And have I ever told you how much I love your battle scenes? Always awaiting your next chapter -Taka
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was long? X3 Well I suppose so but it goes by so quickly I never notice if it's only been ten minutes or thirty.... :) Your stories and updates always inspire me to write too and I always have something that needs updating. Despite how all the drama makes me cringe sometimes, I'm glad it's there to make the story more plausible and realistic. I'm still annoyed that Squall has to appease Lore :/ It all works out with their characters, but it's still annoying X3 I'm sure you'll make up for it though
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Title: To lazy! Bleh >,
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny1 On: May 19, 2008 06:53 EDT
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Omg I'm so happy you came out with a new chapter!*rolls around in joy* Errors...? There where errors? Cause I didn't see any *looks for them* Thanks for a another kick-ass-tasic chapter >,
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Reviewed By: me On: May 18, 2008 16:01 EDT
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loving it! can't wait for more! congrats for surviving another semester :)
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Reviewed By: SeYa On: April 23, 2008 20:41 EDT
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I think your whole story is great......fantastic even, I come back time and time again to see if you have updated and giving your busy schedule I understand why. I want to see where this ends up so I will continue to wait patiently. Thank you for this...I Love it.
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Reviewed By: me On: April 14, 2008 22:20 EDT
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Can't wait for more!
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Title: Ganbatte!
Reviewed By: Natashi On: April 09, 2008 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job with the chapter! Every chapter almost seems like a cliffie as I hang precariously off my seat. Good luck with school and hopefully we'll see another chapter soon!
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