| "Oops" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Title: Gewd
Reviewed By: pseudohanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gewd, gewd. Though it wasn't much of a surprise, I waited word by word for her to figure it out. Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: sweetest angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL ! really great story... it's really funny. It is really the end? *pout* I would love to read more, please! Either way, beautiful work!! *grin*
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Title: Oh, shit
Reviewed By: Amadoni-unsigned On: December 12, 2007 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, that was funny.
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Reviewed By: Laryssa On: November 19, 2007 15:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Haha. I absolutely loved this. Not only was it an awesome lemon but it was funny too! I agree that you should make this into a multi-chapter lemon story. It has great potential.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 20:51 CDT
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omfg i loved the ending lol im was laughing for a awhile and my sister thought i was crazy omg good enging i loved it XD lol
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Reviewed By: duckgirl566 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my GOD!!!!!! not only was that a great lemon, but pretty funny too. you should make this into a multi-chapter lemon fic. =D
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Title: Oops :D
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead On: May 05, 2007 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL that made me giggle "Oops. . ." I can see her crunching her lips together. looolzzzzz good oops though. lovely fanfic once again my darling Scarlet. You are truely the creme of the crop.
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Title: good story please write more please!!!
Reviewed By: lady silverfox a.k.a. mychelle 79 On: March 11, 2007 21:58 CDT
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i liked it u gonna write more? hope so. inuyasha dosen't know what he missed out on!!! alright kagome screwed sesshomaru(the ice king with a popsicle stick up his ass)!!!! do u think sesshomaru should go to the hospitl get that popcicle stick sergicaly removed from his ass?
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Reviewed By: Queen_ofhearts On: February 25, 2007 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz tell me your going to continue this story. It's so good
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 18:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Snickers. Ooopss is right...wonder what happened to the hanyou? Nice little lemon.
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Reviewed By: more!!!!!!! On: February 22, 2007 19:03 CST
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SO INCREDIBLY GOOOOD!!! More please!!
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Title: Hehe
Reviewed By: celestialmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well not that it mattered who she was with..just that she got what she wanted. -smirks-
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Reviewed By: One of a kind! ^.- On: February 22, 2007 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all things she says Oops at the end! lol Loved it! =] Please..continue..^.^
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 15:19 CST
Comment/Review:
aw... is that it? That was rele good... GREAT JOB!!
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Reviewed By: __candycoated [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you SO much. At the risk of sounding like an english teacher...great grammar and word-choice. I enjoyed every second of this, it was wonderful!
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Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 12:51 CST
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Hilarious. A horny and silly Kagome and a Taiyoukai who takes what was offered him so willingly even if it wasn´t intentional.
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Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 12:51 CST
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Hilarious. A horny and silly Kagome and a Taiyoukai who takes what was offered him so willingly even if it wasn´t intentional.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Ooppppps!!!!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA That's very good! And provided in dark wooded area's, it is actually very impossible to even see your hand in front of your face, I can see how that could happen. I love sess/kag pairing. Sesshoumaru is delicious... I need one for myself.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 20:50 CST
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Ha! It was to be expected, but it was still so very, very funny!! The only question is: where was the poor, dumb hanyou? Too bad he'll never know what he missed out on. Heh heh! The best laid plans of mice and virgins ... Loved it! You should write more of these.
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