| "Love's True Light" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 00:01 CDT
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Dang it...Stop with the suspense...YOU'RE HELLA WRONG (-.-)' (_ _) Dang it, you had me on the edge of my seat as I unconsciously leaned towards my laptop screen in anticipation...I swear your story is so going to eventually worsen my eye sight with all this action and suspense. But honestly it was worth the patient wait of your update.
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Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: June 02, 2007 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
im glad u updated...true its been awhile...a long while, but at least ure still written.
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Reviewed By: Hime Jun Hi On: June 02, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXELENT!!!! I vote that Kilala show's up!!!!
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Title: Uncooperative Muses
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fickle as they are, muses seem to have the nasty habit of rebelling at the worse times. Perhaps you ought to threaten it with making it face off with Karasu, ALONE AND WEAPONLESS, and see if that doesn't kick it into a much more cooperative and creative mood. HEH! HEH! HEH!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 15:18 CDT
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i love it!!!! keep on updating!!!! don't stop!!!!
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Reviewed By: armybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! *mutters about evil the evil cliffy*
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Title: Love's True Light
Reviewed By: A_Miko's_Heartache On: May 26, 2007 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic, but i cant lie. it could be better, ... but... I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! Update NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: lsc33 On: May 24, 2007 21:07 CDT
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I do not usually read kag/kur fanfics, but I thought a change would be good. So far so good. Needs alittle more suspense and let kag be herself (a spit fire) Kurama is just to sexy....... Any way a real good start. Update soon.....Oh, Please make the lemon with emotion; I have read alot of stories, but the lemons are mostly about the sex and not the emotions behind the beautiful act of Love. Don't let people descourage you from your writing, always remember its your story, you can take our advise or not. Its your imagination; use it :}
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Reviewed By: Xie Yen On: May 16, 2007 04:51 CDT
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Don't take too long on writing that chapter.
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 22:10 CDT
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hmm wonder how kurama is gunna save both kagome and his mom... ill be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: randomppl72 On: May 15, 2007 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really cool. please update soon!!! i want to see kagome fight!!!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 23:30 CDT
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wow! this story has changed a lot since the last time i read it! lol but i like it ^_^ Althought i really don't think Shiori would EVER refer to Kurama as a 'thing' because even though she sees the drastic changes in him he STILL is her son...but thats just my opinion. oh and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Tell me that Kagome is totally gonna kick butt!!! lol because the girl is bad and she could like totally take on those youkai. lol what can i say? i'm a fan of a strong and skilled Kagome lol. I look forward to your update tho and wish you the best luck in Updating ^_^ hehe ja ne!
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Title: HI
Reviewed By: Mousers18 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome, please continue to write this, i enjoyed it alot so ya please and ty
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Reviewed By: Not Good On: April 21, 2007 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story doesnt have any drama in it its just 1..2..3..Boom there it is, I mean make it a little bit more interesting. Like have Kagome fight for her freedom, have Kurama and her meet not knowing that they are fiances. Give the story more than just what it currently has i mean damn it is really bad
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Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! A new chapter!! I love it!! Can't wait for the next one!! Please update soon!!!
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