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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 05:10 CDT
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I noticed you started posting this on AFF.net, I hope you will continue it here.
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Reviewed By: Etsuyo (not signed in) On: April 28, 2008 07:04 CDT
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Sorry... can't be bothered signing in... then it takes me away from the right page and I have to find it and again and it all just becomes a hassle -sighs-. But yes... Etsuyo here (finally); having just read your latest installment - I loved it! The tiger came out of nowhere but I really enjoyed that little twist. I am very happy you chose to focus on their relationships developing this time around - not that I don't of course enjoy your imagery of China, because I do, but I think it is good they have all had a new element installed in the proceedings. Makes me even more anxious to find out what will happen next. I know it is hard to write just now so I will eagerly await your next installment whenever you have a chance to pick up a keyboard once again. Ja ne~
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Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 22:04 CST
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Why are they so mean to Yugi? I thought they were his friends. Some friends! Cute story though.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 02:21 CST
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I really liked it. I knew that tiger would come in somewhere. I'm glad Yugi and Yami just stayed together and Malik realised that Bakura really loves Ryou. Getting Joey to admit he likes Kaiba and Kaiba to say it back is groundbreaking. Now if Joey can sort out what kind of like they could go on.
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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah!!! That was a terrific chapter!! So many things out of the blue there, so many things that made me laugh, and so many that made me go: "-gasp- awww" Bakura coming onto Jou... completely out of the air but it was one of those things that just worked. Didn't end up feeling out of place like can sometimes happen in fics. I thought you described the scenary beautifully - i know I now feel compelled to take the next plane to China and bring along my camera. I say... what is going on with Anzu and Honda eh? The odd couple unites? And I do hope we are all reading Kaiba's secret email correctly. (If not, hey, ur plot, ur story eh? I won't complain either way) I would simply hate for Katsuya's little heart to be broken. But I suppose that IS what drama is all about! (Shame on him for snooping though...) Once again, very well written. I love how the relationships are all beginning to slowly develop now... and how some of them seem obvious but you keep others quite the opposite. I like that, it leaves people dancing on their toes instead of becoming glazed over with the obvious linear take on the well-worn pairings. I hope you write more soon! Entirely hypocritical coming from me, but I really do love reading this, and hate that i dont get to do so as quickly as i would like. I only read when i know i have time to sit down and read it properly. And, well, life is sometimes distracting. I'll write you an email very soon! (With more apologies you can be sure) So until then: Keep writing, keep reading, keep being absolutely wonderful! And I hope you can forgive me one day! -Etsuyo xoxo
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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 03:03 CST
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Waaii!! I think you definately deserve two seperate reviews, not one with both jammed together!! So about this chapter - awesome! You had dream!Kaiba die on a blimp then come back to life and make out with Jou. That's what I like to see. Poor boy so confused about his own feelings... I think it would be silly to write what I hope will happen next when you've already written the next chapter... I'll just end up looking foolish and contradicting myself next review. So I'll save it and keep reading. And, as always, brilliantly written!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 09:37 CST
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Good chapter. I don't think Seto is getting mixed signals. I think he likes Joey and Joey likes him. I wonder fi they will ever admit it.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 08:56 CST
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Good chapter. I hope they really do start to ge aong. Seto is an ass at times.
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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 07:58 CDT
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Feel free to mame me for not reading and reviewing this sooner. I'm such a bad friend -_-" But I finally have and I'm glad I did (not that I wouldn't have, I just might have put it off for longer), coz it was excellent! There seemed to be a bit more sarcasm and inuendo in this chapter (course that might just be me), but I like that about a story, so it's a good thing in my opinion! I can see the plot begining to slowly develop. Kaiba begins to wonder whether there's a reason he's always with Jou... and Bakura threatened Malik to keep out of his Hikari's pants. Always good movement. Your chapter made me smile. Which was totally what I needed tonight. I like how you included another character from the series, even if it was/is only a guest appearance. There are so many great characters that people forget coz they're not the main ones!! Please keep writing. I know that's rich coming from me, who hasn't even opened the document her story is saved in, in over two months, but really! keep writing! I love reading your story, and every time I finish a chapter (after, yeah, getting my ass into gear and doing so) all I wanna do is look for a "next chapter" button. Coz I wanna keep reading! I gotta know what happens! Personally, I'd like to see Katsuya and Seto go at eachother with spatula's... but hey... you're the author :P I love your story, and the way you write, and everything about your works! And also, I beg forgivness for not reviewing sooner. I probably won't be able to say that enough. Speak soon luv! xoxo
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 02:19 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad they got to talk to Mako. Poor Yuugi seems to be the only one still passionate about Duel Monsters. Bakura and Malik are so funny. I hope Bakura doesn't hurt Malik. I can't even imagine what the recipe is. I hope they can get along enough to bond and make the food.
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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 08:31 CDT
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Okay let's not point out how long it's taken me to review this latest chapter... But yes, I did love it! As brilliant as always. That bit about Jou eating the dog meat was priceless. I mean, I cringed and laughed at the same time. Pretty good idea though, I must say. Kaiba's such an ass, man. Just wanted to punch him! ... You know, metophorically... Anyway, keep up the good work and write more soon! I look forward to it! -tackles- -love- Byes!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 06:48 CDT
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Great chapter. I feel a little bad for the hawker but not much, really. I feel worse for Jounouchi, Kaiba is really mean. I hope things will get better for Jounouchi.
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 04:13 CDT
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XD Nice Poor Jou, Kaiba can be so mean! I loved the Borat references though, I can so see Marik running around naked and yelling "Sexy Time" everywhere XD. And have apet chicken... yeah.... X3 OMG cliff hanger with Mako, never thought we'd see him again, though it does figure he'd be here XD Good work, can't wait for more! (I'll send yah more quiz survey things as I get them, I'd send you this one I'm doing on gaia but it's over 1000 questions long XD)
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 02:16 CDT
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XD Wow Poor Yuugi and Ryou. I'd go mad with a yami like those two... eh.. never mind -___-++ Yami and Bakura better do something good...poor Jou being stuck with such a sour puss too.. and poor Otogi and his wallet. It almsot seems like a depressing vacation ^^;;;
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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 02:23 CDT
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Another brilliant chapter! I loved the old man running off with Otogi's wallet. Gold! Good muse for adding that in there. Also loved how Katsuya just fell out of the closet XD -giggles- Nicely done. Totally made my day to get an update from you on this fic!! So write more soon!! I can't wait to find out what happens =D
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