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Reviewed By: wynterfrost1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2010 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story but I so want more need for you to finish this interesting story come on
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Title: lol hi
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 23:05 CST
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Ok you crazy chick lol this is how weirded out I'am I read this fic a while ago and never figure out til now who you are. WTF WILLOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so yeah how's bout a squeal when you get some free time.
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Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has been absolutely gripping so dramatic and touching . I would love to see more of it .
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Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG , that was such an awesome chapter , my emotions were all over the place !
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyo Willow - it's Kitten. Neways, liked the story, (even after what I said lol) it t'was good, sequel would be cool too. Oh, and yeah, I almost forgot...READ MY FANFICS NOW TOO!!! XD Love Kitty x chuu x
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS DEFINITELY GOOD AND I REALLY ENJOYED IT! I BELIEVE A SEQUEL WOULD B GOOD THAT WAY WE WOULDN'T BE WONDERING ABOUT EVERYBODY ELSE N WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM...I WAS DEFINTELY WONDERING WHO 'SHE' WAS! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this new chapter ROCKED i can't wait to read wha happens next so please update soon that was so sweet of sess to have a home built for them...and it was almost to sweet to put it across form where he first realized how much he loved him
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote "yes" and ohh i'm kinda close well is it his old friend or....his mother?! Ahhh you getta tell me!! Another great job *gives you some cake* hehe now I have to know where is everyone and what will happen next will seey and yasha have their own baby?! till then much love!! ^_^
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Title: the story
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 01:39 CDT
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it is difficult for me to rate this fic - so i purposely and deliberately left the ratings blank. there are many delayed answers in your fic, but i dont know why it was so. and the plot was a little strange. what did you want to say? that inuyasha and sesshoumaru belonged together? but the way to that realization does not seem plausible within the context of the story. you basically told the reader that hey, this is so... but it wasnt convincing. you need to be able to bring the reader with you, or at least make the reader believe that the tale CAN happen. i think you made the fic too short for what you wanted the fic to say. the idea of the fic is pretty good, it just needs substantiating.....which you CAN do. i wish you more success with the next one.
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 23:33 CDT
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yes i definitedly think you should do a sequel. you left too many unanswered questions to let it end like that. besides, i want to know who 'she' is also.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 20:05 CDT
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i really loved this story. & yes i would lyk u to make a sequel to this.
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Reviewed By: yuki023 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
short. simple. and to the point there's nothing to not like about it
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending!! It was a little too short for my liking, but it was still awesome!! I would like to know who 'she' is and where Rin went. Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats cute, and....how is she/ i really wanna know
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Title: all the chapters
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am a tad confused. so i am waiting to be enlightened. miroku? wasnt that a little too much to the left?
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think im going to cry, i love it.......so cute, i love how they look together and will sess take care of InuMaru as his own?(love da name) anyways update real soon okay
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! but Inuyasha still loves Kagome??? im kinda confused.... and OMFG WTF!!?!?!?!?!?! MIRUKO DID THAT!! THAT SICK BASTARD!!!! but i still love him lol but awwww >_
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 (4got 2 sign in) On: March 12, 2007 20:32 CDT
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who is the gurl that sesshomaru talks about?? now ur gonna make me think. lol. good chapters btw. keep up the good work & update soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Cookies!! hehe I love it the ooc-ness is good for what you're trying to do and a lot of what the feel fits them if ya think about. I wish the chapter was longer but i love that you keep me wanting to read more! Who's the lady with rin...an x-lover to sessy or a sister what?!!! anyway till next time! and thanks for the cookie hehe
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great couple of chapters! I wonder who this woman, that Sesshomaru was talking about, is?!? I hope he can forgive Rin. Now that Jaken was mentioned, I wonder where he is!! I can't believe Miroku's the father.....I had thought it was Kouga, but I guess I was wrong! (LOL) I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: names...
Reviewed By: ____insert user here (laziness is a virtue, I tell you!) On: March 10, 2007 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, okay, I'm terrible. I haven't yet reviewed this story... but I've been reading it. *sigh* Shock factor over? Good. Well, about the names... someone mentioned "Inukoji" to you... the word "koji", when translated properly, can mean orphan, among other, more pleasant things (like tradition, old temple, baby tiger, etc.). But unless you plan to kill off any possible proxies for the baby, I don't suggest using any spinoff of this term. As for "InuKiba", this is not, technically, a word, let alone a name. (Nor is Inukoji, but that's not quite the point.) The word "kiba" can and does mean fang, but is often also used as tusk. As it is your story, you can call this incoming character anything you like. But if it is in your interest to use a real Japanese word/name that uses the term "inu", may I suggest "Inutsuge"? (Pronounced without the second "u" sound, therefore something like "ee-noots-geh"...) This word translates to a form of holly that is indigenous to Japan. (You might not want to name a male child something flowery, either, though... so maybe you shouldn't take my advice...) It's not really a name, directly, but it's a word. ("Yamainu" and "Yaseiinu" can mean something like wild dog... as in jackal... but see? There's "inu"! -_-) The above are just suggestions, mind you. I'm sorry if I sound condescending; I don't mean to. As for the actual story, you're doing a pretty good job in the writing department. The characters are a bit out of character, but... I have no personal oppositions to this. My only (minor) problem is that the last chapter was a bit overly melodramatic. But that is my only remainging complaint, and I'll live... Thank you for posting and entertaining the masses! We all need something to liven us up in the dead of what's become a fairly cold winter (where I am... a little late, perhaps, but that's weather for you). Bye!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like InuKiba it work to me. And Sessy isn't gonna just let him go is he!!?? NOOOOOOOO you gotta do something he can't go off by his self with a new born!!!! And will the other's find out what happen, will inu and sessho both run into miroku and the others? I know it was miroku or koga cuz everyone would think it to be naraku and as for koga people uesd him a lot so miroku would be the one noe thinks of. YAY can i get a cookie for that guess!!! till next time
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Reviewed By: Moon_Angel On: March 10, 2007 06:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving the story so far. It's really cool. I ain't liking Miroku very much though. Rin seems to be a mature yough woman and very good with childbirth apparently. Where's Jaken though? I thought he always followed Sesshomaru around. Any ways, I'm loving the way Sesshomaru and Inuyasha have gotten so close over a short period of time. As for the name of Inuyasha's baby, why not use Inukoji? I like the name Kojimaru, but you wated something with `Inu' In it. So Inukoji is my sugesstion for Inuyasha's baby's name.
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great stor....poor inu I'm not liking miroku right now lol...sesshy had better not let inu leave....he knows he has feelings for him that would ruin everything...*sigh* =] update soon please
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, I loved the chapters 4 & 5! Keep up the awesome work! InuKiba, huh? Hmmmm, I like it, but my friend wants to see InuMaru. She says it will be like the best of both worlds. I got her reading you story, and she's a little nuts! Forgive her!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:22 CST
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where's jaken? was he killed the poor thing. I wonder what it was that Inu did other than get pregnant. Sess's paternal instincts are kicking in.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:09 CST
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So is Rin a full grown woman in this one. Where did she learn how to deliver a baby or about dilation. Did she spend a few years in a human village with a preistess when she started her period. Is that why she knows about this. AHHHHHH! Too many questions!
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Reviewed By: sesshygirl05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story. I wonder who Inuyasha is pregnant for. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very nice story and well written. I look forward to finding out what has happened to Inuyasha and to watching Sesshoumaru become more protective of him. You make me want to hang around and watch the mystery unfold. ^_^ Snow
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Title: love
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! i love this story so far please update soon. gotta know whats going to happen. who's Inuyasha baby daddy.lol like you didn't know that was coming.
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