| "Something To Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think im going to cry, i love it.......so cute, i love how they look together and will sess take care of InuMaru as his own?(love da name) anyways update real soon okay
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! but Inuyasha still loves Kagome??? im kinda confused.... and OMFG WTF!!?!?!?!?!?! MIRUKO DID THAT!! THAT SICK BASTARD!!!! but i still love him lol but awwww >_
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 (4got 2 sign in) On: March 12, 2007 20:32 CDT
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who is the gurl that sesshomaru talks about?? now ur gonna make me think. lol. good chapters btw. keep up the good work & update soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Cookies!! hehe I love it the ooc-ness is good for what you're trying to do and a lot of what the feel fits them if ya think about. I wish the chapter was longer but i love that you keep me wanting to read more! Who's the lady with rin...an x-lover to sessy or a sister what?!!! anyway till next time! and thanks for the cookie hehe
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great couple of chapters! I wonder who this woman, that Sesshomaru was talking about, is?!? I hope he can forgive Rin. Now that Jaken was mentioned, I wonder where he is!! I can't believe Miroku's the father.....I had thought it was Kouga, but I guess I was wrong! (LOL) I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: names...
Reviewed By: ____insert user here (laziness is a virtue, I tell you!) On: March 10, 2007 16:28 CST
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Okay, okay, I'm terrible. I haven't yet reviewed this story... but I've been reading it. *sigh* Shock factor over? Good. Well, about the names... someone mentioned "Inukoji" to you... the word "koji", when translated properly, can mean orphan, among other, more pleasant things (like tradition, old temple, baby tiger, etc.). But unless you plan to kill off any possible proxies for the baby, I don't suggest using any spinoff of this term. As for "InuKiba", this is not, technically, a word, let alone a name. (Nor is Inukoji, but that's not quite the point.) The word "kiba" can and does mean fang, but is often also used as tusk. As it is your story, you can call this incoming character anything you like. But if it is in your interest to use a real Japanese word/name that uses the term "inu", may I suggest "Inutsuge"? (Pronounced without the second "u" sound, therefore something like "ee-noots-geh"...) This word translates to a form of holly that is indigenous to Japan. (You might not want to name a male child something flowery, either, though... so maybe you shouldn't take my advice...) It's not really a name, directly, but it's a word. ("Yamainu" and "Yaseiinu" can mean something like wild dog... as in jackal... but see? There's "inu"! -_-) The above are just suggestions, mind you. I'm sorry if I sound condescending; I don't mean to. As for the actual story, you're doing a pretty good job in the writing department. The characters are a bit out of character, but... I have no personal oppositions to this. My only (minor) problem is that the last chapter was a bit overly melodramatic. But that is my only remainging complaint, and I'll live... Thank you for posting and entertaining the masses! We all need something to liven us up in the dead of what's become a fairly cold winter (where I am... a little late, perhaps, but that's weather for you). Bye!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like InuKiba it work to me. And Sessy isn't gonna just let him go is he!!?? NOOOOOOOO you gotta do something he can't go off by his self with a new born!!!! And will the other's find out what happen, will inu and sessho both run into miroku and the others? I know it was miroku or koga cuz everyone would think it to be naraku and as for koga people uesd him a lot so miroku would be the one noe thinks of. YAY can i get a cookie for that guess!!! till next time
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Reviewed By: Moon_Angel On: March 10, 2007 06:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving the story so far. It's really cool. I ain't liking Miroku very much though. Rin seems to be a mature yough woman and very good with childbirth apparently. Where's Jaken though? I thought he always followed Sesshomaru around. Any ways, I'm loving the way Sesshomaru and Inuyasha have gotten so close over a short period of time. As for the name of Inuyasha's baby, why not use Inukoji? I like the name Kojimaru, but you wated something with `Inu' In it. So Inukoji is my sugesstion for Inuyasha's baby's name.
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great stor....poor inu I'm not liking miroku right now lol...sesshy had better not let inu leave....he knows he has feelings for him that would ruin everything...*sigh* =] update soon please
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, I loved the chapters 4 & 5! Keep up the awesome work! InuKiba, huh? Hmmmm, I like it, but my friend wants to see InuMaru. She says it will be like the best of both worlds. I got her reading you story, and she's a little nuts! Forgive her!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:22 CST
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where's jaken? was he killed the poor thing. I wonder what it was that Inu did other than get pregnant. Sess's paternal instincts are kicking in.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:09 CST
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So is Rin a full grown woman in this one. Where did she learn how to deliver a baby or about dilation. Did she spend a few years in a human village with a preistess when she started her period. Is that why she knows about this. AHHHHHH! Too many questions!
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Reviewed By: sesshygirl05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story. I wonder who Inuyasha is pregnant for. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very nice story and well written. I look forward to finding out what has happened to Inuyasha and to watching Sesshoumaru become more protective of him. You make me want to hang around and watch the mystery unfold. ^_^ Snow
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Title: love
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! i love this story so far please update soon. gotta know whats going to happen. who's Inuyasha baby daddy.lol like you didn't know that was coming.
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