| "A rutine day on the Bebop" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: This fic needs to die... now!
Reviewed By: Spoot On: June 03, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you thought it was a good idea to inflict this on the world. Seriously, what is WRONG with you? Go get help now before the voices come for you!
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Reviewed By: Nakitia On: November 29, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
U PEOPLE ARE SO EWWWWWWW U USE WOMAN TO MUCH U ASSWIPE U FUCKING ASSHOLE, U DICK HEAD, FAT ASS. VICOUS WHATEVER WILL DO THAT IN YOUR OTHER STORY NOT JET SO FUCK U
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Reviewed By: ......................... On: October 13, 2003 11:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
um....that sucked...funny...but everything else sucked...
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Reviewed By: kamehameha* On: October 07, 2003 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm.. that was... ok I guess... It was really badly written, very un-detailed... and.. I just can't get my head around Ed doing something like that..! The lemon was too rushed and..uh.. boring. Needs work.
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 06:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg that was totally..whewwwwww hot..and no offense but totally funny, the way Ed stuck to fayes breast like a sucker fish?? priceless and jet getting off in the storage room??? too funny, again great lemon totally hot and lusty and all that good stuff..:-)
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Reviewed By: PrincessLemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's just like Ed too and I loved the ending! LOLOLOLOL! First time I ever found a humorus lemon and I loved it! KEEP WRITING!!! |
Reviewed By: SOD On: February 06, 2003 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must breath...
Need oxygen, laughter causing lack of oxygen...
*gag**cough*
*phew* That was hilarious, it really was, i hope u make more! |
Reviewed By: The Last Face [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jet does not sit and jerk off! Jet kicks down the door and demands his share of the nookie! Vicious watches and jerks off! |
Reviewed By: Duo the Random Chick-Monk On: January 06, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, they tell ya teh explain yer ratin, so here goes: Style of Writing: 10/10 'Cuz it was 'bout as close teh the actual series as Duo's ever read. Spelling & Grammar: 9/10 Well, how can yeh possibly write a good C-Bop fic with proper grammar or spelling, tell Duo that, would jya? ^_~ Enjoyment Factor: 10/10 ...It was just awsome. hehe ^_^
Yea, so... Duo really liked this ficcy! Was very, um... entertaining...teh say the least... ^_^ hehe
Well, keep up the good work! Jaa Nee!
~Duo the Random~ |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: January 04, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny funny...Next time more Detailed ;) |
Reviewed By: Megumi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked is just that i gave you nines because i think you can really improve. If you ever need my help than i'm here for you. |
Reviewed By: radical ed's biggest fan On: August 21, 2002 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the BEST fanfics I've ever read!
Hope you write some more,bye. |
Reviewed By: ATP On: November 28, 2002 14:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Funny, but very badly written. For example:
"Watch what yer doin watchin you little shit."
Someone needs a bit of grammer, huh. |
Reviewed By: Chichoie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was funny very!! lol !! |
Reviewed By: Krazy Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2002 08:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Funny! Funny and really FUNNY! I like the whole Ed, Faye and Spike thing going on! You really got something there! Keep writing! *grin* |
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