| "Senjo no Ai" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: hairylobster On: May 23, 2007 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need someone to read this over before you submit it. The grammer is not entirely bad, but the spelling is terrible!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: kaesaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
update~ ooh, can't wait for the uncut version of naruto & itachi's tryst! hehe.. ;p and, eww, sasuke likes kakashi??? that's like..incest, or somethins! the incest that i DON'T like anyway.. haha! oh, and poor gaara.. can't wait for the next update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
THings are getting interestinger...poor gaara...can't wait for the next chappy!!...
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Title: SAVE GAARA
Reviewed By: NINE_TAIL_FOX_KID_23 On: April 11, 2007 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOMEBODY PLZ SAVE GAARA!!!!
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Reviewed By: happybunnies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO! SAVE GAARA! >.< get haku to save him or something. P.S. love your story =D
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Reviewed By: starexintoxoblivion On: April 05, 2007 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you hurt gaara? *sad puppy eyes*. Please continue soon; i need to know what happens! I hope the apprentice saves Gaara and turns out to be Neji...and he helps gaara regain his mentality...then they fall madly in love.....Naruto is sad but wants gaara to be happy and knows that he is falling in love with Itachi....and Sasuke (after being midly attracted to Naruto and maybe having some fun with him) realises that he actually loves Haku and Haku loves him back......and then that evil doctor gets pushed out of a window. mwahahahh....erm mabe i got a bit carried away, ne?
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 09:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN TO GAARA????!!!! *you are mean* I really hope Naruto rescues him or something._.._.everyones after naruto._.._.update soon please
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: kaesaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
..loves your fic! totally enjoyed reading it! i so love naruto-seme so expect me to wait for your updates~ poor gaara.. wanna know more 'bout what happened w/ him~ please, do continue! ^_^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 19:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOVING THIS STORY UP TO NOW!!!!! it's sounds like it is going to be very interesting!! Can't wait for the next Chapter!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You did what I asked! I like the the idea of Naruto being a protective person of Gaara. Plaese Keep this chapter going. UPDATE!
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Title: Keep going
Reviewed By: Ruhtra Nakal On: March 07, 2007 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome keep going with the Naru/Sasuke!!!
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Reviewed By: PARTYGIRL101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
grat story
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Reviewed By: Evvy On: March 02, 2007 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so far, so I can't wait for the next chapter. Not that I'm trying to rush you, 'cause I know a lot of writer hate that. Sorry I didn't review earlier, but it took me forever to figure out how to leave a review.
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Title: really good story
Reviewed By: Karla_999 On: February 26, 2007 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story so far ^_~ really kool plz put up the next chapter i can't wait to see what Naruto want's from Saske when if he win's ^_^
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST UPDATE! Longer chapters thouggh is what is needed.
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