| "When the Cherry Blossoms Bloom" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 08:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sigh... that was such a dreamy chapter (minus the edward being pissed scenes). you make roy and winry seem perfect for each other,seriously! and...nice name; winifred. HAHA
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 23:13 EST
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I am finding myself agreeing with TaintedShikonShards completely, especially about ed and his mmmm, "reaction"
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I loved Ed's "reaction" to everything...that was hilarious. Al and Maes are great for the comic relief during Ed's more serious moments. Overall, a wonderful chapter! Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 00:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! It just ends! I want to hear what Roy and Winry say to eachother and whatnot..but I GUESS I can wait for the next chapter. Great job...as always...and yea, I love the inserts from ep. 37, that is definitely the funniest episode in the series. I feel so bad for Huges though, its just so sad that he isnt with his family and you do a great job of portraying that saddness in your story. Keep up with the writing!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 23:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished the prequel and these chapters, still blushing from head to toe from the prequel. First, I think you have to be a little sick minded to have put Winery with Mustang. But, you have sucked me into your sick little world and now I really want to find out what happens with them all in it. I remember my Mom saying something about couriosity and a cat... BTW I really like your style, you have a few odd sentences but I seem to always be able to figure out what you're trying to convey. Keep up the good work and please update when you have the time, or I might have to subject the characters to my own sick little world (laughs evily)
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 17:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry, it flowed wonderfully! Adding scenes from the anime definitely helped progress the story and keep it "realistic". I love where this is going, and I love Ed's reactions to all of this. I'm conflicted at this point as to whether or not I should feel bad for Ed..but I guess if he wanted Winry he had chances all along so, nah... I love the WinryxRoy story line! Keep updating, I can't wait for chapter 3!
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Title: woot!
Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 05:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
utterly fab! (i've decided to read this brilliant fanfic on this website. uncensored is (almost) always better!) great chap, update =)
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Reviewed By: xxfujixfuuxx On: February 28, 2007 22:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the prequel, 'Feel me, Shame me, Heal me' It was one of the best that I've read in a long time. I can't wait to read where you take the characters in this one.
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Reviewed By: YukiShuichi4ever On: February 27, 2007 20:18 EST
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I thought it was really good. I was just wondering if you were going to change the government in the alchemist world because at the end of the anime it looked that they changed to a democracy ( a congress and stuff) . So wouldn't that change Roy's goal because there is no fuher.
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Title: Great Start!
Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great start! Can't wait for chapter two! (and no....it wasn't OOC at all) Keep it up! (Like always)
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