| "Dirty Dancing" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: April 18, 2007 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Is holding a torch and swinging it wildly at an entire colony of ants* Back! Back I say! It wasn't that sweet! Oh hey, great chapter. Hehe, I loved it when Kagome thought Inu was a blanket. And the pillow fight was great. Not to mention the part where she tweaked Inu's ear and te resulting purr from him. It was cute. Just so you know, I'm geting to hate Kikyo more now thanks to you but it's ok. I hope that Inu and Kagome kick ass in the competition. Show up that rich snobby bitch of the east lol. *Tosses the torch onto the ants and pulls out a bag of marshmallows* hehe take that! Anyway, once again great chaptr. I'm looking forward to reading more in the future. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: April 17, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Is currently covered in ants* Well done...very sweet. perhaps a little too sweet, judging by the reaction of these ants. So, finally the truth about Inu and Kikyo's past comes to life. What a bitch! I can't believe she led him on like that. Now Kagome is sick, oh well. At least Inu and Kagome are together again, even if she is sligtly pissed at him. Oh, and Shippo finally said something, hopefully he'll start talking more and maybe even giving Inu a hard time hehe. Anyway, this is gonna be my last ratings section. It never changes so there's no point in keeping it up, I'll only do it in future reviews if one or more ratings have changed, so 10s across the board. Great chapter for a great fic. *Gives you a Shippo plushie* Can't wait to read more. See ya later! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: April 13, 2007 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Stares wide-eyed* WHAT! I can't believe you Inu. Kagome should seriously sit his ass, then tie him up and make him explain himself. What a baka. Oh well, nothing can be done now but wait for the next chapter. Oh yeah, I knew it. Miroku couldn't help himself. Oh well, he's still lovable, even if he is a lech. And finally Koga makes another appearance. I was hoping you'd have him in the story again. I love the little arguments between him and Inu, althogh his cluelessness when it comes to Kagome completely pisses me off. You'd think he'd have noticed by now. Hehe, again like Miroku it can't be helped. It's part of what makes Koga, Koga. Ugh...and don't even get me started on Kikyo dancing with Naraku, that's just...ick. I don't care how hot Naraku is, he's still evil lol. Anyway, on to the ratings: 10s across the board once again. Very enjoyable fic, although the cliffies are evil. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Until next time! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: April 13, 2007 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomps* Hey, hehe. Great chapter. I just can't believe it, why must Inu be tortured by teaching that old lecherous hag to dance? He should be teaching Kagome to ddance and snogging the hell out of her afterwards. Lol, just kidding. I know how important it is not to rush things in fics. Aso for Miroku? Theres no way he'll last a week without oggling another woman lol. Anyway, on to the ratings: again 10s across the board. I'm really liking this fic. Keep up the great work. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: April 13, 2007 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pounces* Ha ha! Another chapter done. Sorry it took me so long to review. As you know I've been working on my own fic. I loved this chapter. Poor Shippo, being chased around by Inu. All of that over some ramen hehe. And Kagome nailing Inu in the head with a box of tissues, absolutely priceless. I can just see how cute Inu would look covered in a mountain of clothes too. Oh, and the lobster tank incident? My stomach hurts from laughing. Anyway, on to the ratings: 10s across the board, great chapter. I can't wait to read more. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *screams louder waking the neighbors* at 12:26am and you left me with THAT!?! he BETTER NOT GO WITH THAT BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Kikyo) UGHHHHH i will crack the shits if he DID!!!!!!! please continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: April 13, 2007 01:48 CDT
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Holy shucks. He left just like that! No explanation? I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: April 12, 2007 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! You have finally updated. Lol! Don't worry your updates are faster than the other fics im reading xD And another great chapter you have updated here. And i was so glad that wasn't KIKYO! -shudders- The name gives me the heebeejeebees!! Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww Inuyasha and Kagome are sooooo CUTE ^.^ and ha i started to panick thinking it was Kikyo....... thank god lol XD keep up the good work!!!! ps i LOVE the 2 ast sentence ^^
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: April 11, 2007 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! Who knew Inu could be so sweet ;D Just kidding. Keep up the good work !!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww its soooo GOOD!!!! i LOVE it!! and :O how can you finish with that kind of endning >_< i cant for the next chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: hailey On: March 09, 2007 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good waiting for more!!!
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: March 08, 2007 03:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Stares at the fic with wide eyes* You're evil. (Hehehe, just kidding.) Making poor Shippo fight like that. He got the piss knocked out of him. Oh well, as long as he's ok in the end. The dance lessons are progressing nicely, but just how big are Kagome's feet? Lol. It's pretty cool the way you managed to make Inu a part-time underground fighter though. Bankotsu was evil too, using a dagger in a no-weapons match. *Punches Bankotsu* There I feel better now. Anywho, great chapter. I'd write a lot more but I'm still suffering from brainfartitis lol. Again look to my previous reviews for rating explanations. Keep up the great work. Catch ya at the end of the next chapter. -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: March 08, 2007 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Grins and pounces* Hey, 'tis me again. Another great chapter has come and gone. I loved the way Miroku and Sango pushed Inu and Kagome together. And the late night dinner between Inu and Kagome, priceless. I can definitely see him making Kagome do the cooking. I think Inu would probably just burn the water if he had to do it lol. What's this? Kagome getting to call him Yasha? Wonder if she'll try to tweak his ears? Now that would be worth the price of admission alone to see what happens then, lol. Anyway, for the reasons behind my ratings see my previous reviews. Nothing has changed and I'm having a total brainfart on how to say the same thing differently this time around. *Tosses you an Inu plushie* That is for a job well done. Great chapter once again, and great fic. See ya later. -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 10:31 CST
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This is really good! Please update soon!
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