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Reviewed By: Zoey Jade On: November 22, 2011 23:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this the first time I read it and rereading it made me enjoy it that much more. Malador's Arrangement is one of my absolute favorites. It was what made me love 1x5. Yours takes whats great about that story and twists it to fit with the 3 boys. They don't get silly. They stay in character. There's not much mush. It makes the boys and the idea of them together that much hotter. I just wish there was even more to the story because I would love to read it. Plus the yummy lemon at the end really is like icing on your fantastic cake! :) |
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the ending and the lemon was great. I'm really glad I read this. I enjoyed it a lot. Duo and Quatre were so cute and the girls in the restaurant were a great touch. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 15, 2007 10:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ending. And you wrote a fantastic lemon, three-some and all. I LOVED the milk moustache kiss. Too funny! Quatre needs to be assertive that way now and then. It's good for him. And the three boys' uncertainty was very appropriate and believable. I truly love your writing. Enjoy the living daylights out of it! (Shatter's my favorite, but Mad was another one that really caught my interest...so I'll just work my way through all of 'em.) You've got a great writing style...a nice edge to it. Unique and enjoyable!
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 09:55 EDT
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Yay happy end happy end.
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really enjoyed this, which kind of surprised me because I am usually a rabid 1x2x1 groupie, but you've convinced me that those three can definitely work. Great fic! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 16:36 EDT
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lol, I trust you to explain. I feel for Wufei. Relationships are a scary thing. But you would think that he'd feel honored that they both came after him. That's love I tell ya.
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you leave off there?! *wails* And that's true, what Heero says: if any of them went into hiding Wufei would DEFINITELY be the biggest pain in the ass to find. Heero rocks. And I can't believe what happened to Wufei's sword! Reminds me of Kenshin. Well, of course that would happen, but...NOOOOOO! And Trowa's quite a stubborn little boy, isn't he? I knew I liked him for a reason. And Hopefully, Relena's not going to come charging in to ruin everything, as she is prone to do. Poor Quatre...thank goodness he has Duo to look after him! Update soon! And don't leave us hanging with Honor Bound. I'm looking forward to that, too. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 14:57 EDT
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-cackles- Go Heero!! Poor Wufei, loosing his sword like that. Those are very hard to fix. I love Heero's last line as well.
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm up to chapter 15 right now. Yay! But I noticed a slight error when 01, 03, 05 are talking about their situation and at the beginning Trowa throws out his stick but at the end, it's back in his hand. Just thought I'd say something. Unless he stole Wufei's and I just didn't notice. Lol.
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 13:28 EDT
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Another good chapter yet again. It's good to know that Quatre is on the road to recovery, and that the duo is closer to finding Wufei. It was nice inclusion to have Hank recoginze Trowa.
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 04, 2007 12:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the latest chapter was awesome! Duo's brilliant, catching on to what was done to Quatre in time to catch Alex. And I loved the way the idiot Alex ranted about Duo not knowing about killing. Too ironic! That whole exchange was amazing! Terrific. Can't wait to see if they are in time to help Quatre though...and how bad it'll get before he gets better, assuming he does. (And, just a little nudge here...Shatter? Can't wait for more on that story, too. I ADORE IT.) You've got great talent, and I know whereof I speak. Really.
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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"Maybe you can help Tro find the missing number," That's what the 10 is for. Such a nifty comment by Duo, to sum everything up.
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 13:50 EDT
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Hot moment on the plane! Nice play of emotions as well. I hope they find Wufei soon.
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 16:21 EDT
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Not as exciting as some of the other chapters, but a sad Duo is always heartwrenching, and Trowa is in the right direction at least. Another good chapter!
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 19:24 EDT
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Sad chapter. I hope Quatre regains his mind. Interesting plot twist concerning Trowa.
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