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"When in Rome" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ]
 Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2006 08:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Hot! Damn Hot! Lol want more! Story and lemons that is. Can't wait for the next update!
 Reviewed By: Gravedigger0017  On: September 30, 2004 03:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE continue this story!! As a lover of Weiss, and an archaeology student, I find this one of THE most incredible fics I've read!!!!! I'm begging you to finish!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 03, 2004 13:42 CST
Comment/Review:
You didn't finish this? WHY didn't you finish this?!! please please please write more. I hate too see such a good story dropped ;_;
 Reviewed By: Kitty-Chan  On: January 27, 2004 11:48 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O_O YOU WRITE MORE OR I WILL DIE! What? I said such a thing? Woooow... Niiiice... Aya and Yohji, Ken and Omi... *shiver* ;-; Now I'm worried about KenKen! Rawr! Write more please!! *-*
 Title: More!!
Reviewed By: Becka  On: January 24, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow....I read this on ff.net and then I found it here and read through it again. If possible, I enjoyed it even more than the first time ^^ Please right more! Don't give up on this one, please! Can't wait till there's another chapter posted ^^ Bai~
 Reviewed By: Kirika  On: April 24, 2003 11:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
No more lemons!! Why not? oh well that doesn't matter. This fic is one of the best I've read so far.
 Reviewed By: shumea  On: April 14, 2003 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, I had to review this...

Honnestly, I didn't think much of it when I started on it. The idea of rome was.. ok. I don't know, it didn't appeal much to me..

But I'm glad I started this fic anyway, because, gods! it was /good/!! I'm totally impressed by your writting skills!! Some things were a bit too obvious. I'd tell a bit more on which parts I'm referring to, but I don't want to give any spoilers to future readers who might look at the comments before starting up on the fic. You can always email me ( shumea@yahoo.com )...

I hope you will continue this fic, because I sure would like to read the rest!!

*shumea*
 Reviewed By: wingedkitten  On: April 13, 2003 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww....not even one more lemon scene between omi and ken to be interrupted by a shocked youji and aya?
 Reviewed By: shinitenshi_shirotenshi  On: February 28, 2003 00:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
shirotenshi: Holy mother of Ra! (Yes, we watch Yu-Gi-Oh! Pretty obvious ain't it?)This is great!!! Hurry up and update person!

shinitenshi: we're trying to register, but the dang thing can't even register US! -__-
 Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 26, 2003 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey... are you sleeing?! We want more :-p

You don't even HAVE TO write lemon scenes if you donÄt want but please continue :)
 Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2003 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting concept. Dying to see when Yohji and Aya discover who Ken is.

The two relationships are well portrayed. Died laughing when I first read that Aya and Yohji are "famed" for their relationship.
 Reviewed By: Suzume Tori  On: October 21, 2002 19:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
MOOOREE **squeals** write more! Or I will lose my sanity! And turn into a... a vegetable!!!!! **wails** or worse! Noooo!

And what's with the 'no more lemon', you evil woman???? **scowls** okay, so long as Ken stops being an ass to himself and realizes he loves Omi or he wouldn't have cared so much about hurting him....

Scary thought.... Omi and Ken's relationship remind me a whole lot of my first. 0_o except theirs is m/m. And I am a female. So that's just not possible ^^;;;;

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Suzume
email :suzume_tori@angelfire.com
 Reviewed By: Talyssa  On: October 03, 2002 16:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
no more LEMONS? are you MAD woman? Thats so so so so so MEAN! Come on doesn't there have to be some kinda lemon at the end when they're out of rome and reaffirming their relationships or SOMETHING? assuming then get out and reaffirm of course but.... you're lemons are good so if thats what your worried about then DON'T WORRY!
 Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2002 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
One of the very best Weiß Kreuz fictions I've read. Very good concept and extraordianry creative ^_^.

Can't wait to read the next part :)
 Reviewed By: Princess  On: July 17, 2002 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wowowowowow how kewl...i hate yohji but it worked in this story wit aya! ken and omi...awww poor omi...;.; *crycry* cant wait to read more!
 Reviewed By: Satin_daisy  On: July 04, 2002 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*slaps Ken*
Fool! You tell Omi that you love him back!
I love your fics! Keep writing!!~or die!!!~
great stuff!
 Reviewed By: ~Ayla's lullaby~ [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 04, 2002 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hé ! I think it's cool that there's a site where you can continue to post your fanfics. Fanfiction.net isn't "in the house" anymore...

Anyway, cool fanfic, I like it and poor Omi, I hope Ken wont break is heart. I like the part "Okay. I confess..." I don't believe it, I thought he was such a good actor (sarcasm).

So, for when the next post...
 Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 03, 2002 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this is a great story and I can't wait to see what happens to them next!

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