Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
"fangirl-cum-Soul Reaper wasn't" prolly not how you should write it. should be 'Come'. the way your wrote it sounds gross. and 1 more thing, is this AU or Canon Universe? i really cant tell what from what. you need to work on your formating too. put empty lines where need. ppl look at masive blocks of text and then get lazy and either skip, or dont read it at all. but it was good writing, dont get me wrong. keep going. ~clusterlizard1
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