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| "Once For All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: MANGA GIRL!!!
Reviewed By: KTbinga On: March 11, 2007 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo!! I love this!!! MIA IS SO CUTE >
| Reviewed By: YvonneandNeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on this, well written and flowing easily. I love the chemistry between Roy and Amelia, they really seem like siblings. Another chapter soon, I cannot wait!
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Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I've seen this plot done numerous times, but I like how you've animated the characters. It complements the story alot. the chapter was the perfect length, not to long, but not snappy. The roy part at the End was really random, but it made me laugh. I can't wait to read the party! good job, happy writing, and keep on bashing the bashers! :)P.S My rating is not following a patern, I actually arted how I thought it was, and thats just how it came out! =^^=
| Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...This looks really good. I love that you've taken the basic 'Roy's younger sister meets the Elrics' and turned in ito something great! I cannot wait to see how this grows!!!! Update soon!
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