| "Destiny's Ploy" Reviews/Comments [ 161 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuluver66613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fucking loved your story! I never wanted it to end but I do love the ending! I am SO happy you are working on the other story again though, the I love the cook, I love to cook one. You are fabulous as a writer and i look forward to hearing more stories about you. I also think that you should read the story The Ghost of You by Kikyou_must_die_13. I loved it, thank you! Au Revoir!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 09:16 CST
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Thank you. This was the ending I'd been hoping for, the bad guys dead, Inuyasha and Kagome together, Miroku and Sango together. Now if only they'd find Kikyo behind bars or even dead... that would be priceless. Thank you for this wonderful story, it was gut wrenching to the end. I've investigated your other fan fic about cooking and love it just as much as I have this one. Looking forward to more stories from you. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... so they all met in the same area and where the plan took place... seems that it worked well for inuyasha though... happy that kagome & inuyasha got their happy ending...good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts bawling my eyes out* i know Inuyasha wouldnt die but OMG i was in tears!!!! *sniff* and im sooooo happy that Kagome got to see her dad;'s grave... and im also HAPPY you didnt delete it :P and ooo so I love the cook, I mean to cook is back ^^ OMFG i think i nearly forgot what happen!!!! *gasps* i need to read it now!!
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 22:43 CST
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i like it i just finished reading all 29 chapters and i cant wait til you update with the last and final chapter and as long as nothing drastic and hate-inspiring happens in said final chapter, then i really hope that there will be a sequel, lol not that i would hate you even if something drastic and hate-inspiring did happen how can you hate someone who posts soooo many inuyasha fanfics, updates as often as you, and obviously loves inuyasha so much!! (((and puts him w/ kagome over kikyo like it should be XD))) ahh!! i love you ..in the non-creepy pyscho-stalker kinda way haha
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i cry!!!!!!! i dont want this to end T-T
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so what is miroku's plan... who did kikyo want bankotsu to kill... what will happen to kagome... will inuyasha finally stop being stupid... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 21:06 CST
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Is it just me is Bankotsu demented? Miroku's right, he is a schizophrenic person and should be locked up. What a sick bastard you have described him as. Awesome. I'm still curious as to who Bankotsu is suppose to kill. Naraku? Inuyasha? Miroku perhaps. At least he was the smart one for putting on the bullet proof vest. Inuyasha had better get his head out of his butt after this and take better care of Kagome. She deserves to be treated as a princess after this whole fiasco. Despite what she's thinking right now, about how much she has been hurt by him and how she wishes that she had never met him, I doubt that she would ever give him up that easily. Thank you for this rather quick update. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter as well as the exciting battle.
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 11:27 CST
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Is it just me or is Bankotsu as perverted as Miroku, if that's possible? I loved how Kagome slapped him, and took his gun, although from the way you described his smile when she held it to his head, it was probably unloaded, just in case she had tried it. I on the on the other hand would have shot the bastard, first chance I got, not threatening him like she did. What is Kikyo up to? Does she want Inuyasha killed? or Naraku? What the hell is Miroku's plan? I hope that one of the boxes has some body armor in it, or else Inuyasha may not survive to see Kagome. Why does he have to be such a jerk toward her any ways? I'm rather surprised that she admitted to Bankotsu that she still loved him, even after what he had done to her. He deserves every miserable dream that he has until she's back in his arms. They always say misery loves company. I hope that Inuyasha made the right decision and gets out of this soon. I want him and Kagome to be happy, as well as Miroku and Sango. Thanks for the update. Don't worry about how long it took to update, with a story this good, it just adds to the suspense. Later.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 06:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are quite complicated now... feel bad for kagome & inuyasha... kagome being held captive by bankotsu... and inuyasha has to stay away from kagome... did they break up... unfair that miroku gets to be with sango but inuyasha can't be with kagome since his situation is more crazy... still wondering what the plan is... is this story almost done... what will inuyasha's reaction be when bankotsu calls him that he has kagome... who did kikyo pay bankotsu to kill... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAIT THE LAST CHAPTER IS NEXT!?! nooo!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 17:34 CST
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Ya know this isn't fare...life isn't fare...but I want to read it untill all is well but every time I see that you updated I get nervouse almost like I don't want to read it cause I don't want to feel Kagomes pain or Inuyasha's pain...Its almost to much for me to handal but I keep reading hopeing and hopeing that all will work out well...I can only hope...T-T....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg ho messed up is it that right when bankostu made up that lie inuyasha called please update soon
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 01:29 CST
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I loved the title of this chapter. Basic 'foot-in-mouth' disease strikes Inuyasha again. Can't he ever catch a break? Sesshomaru is using him, Miroku is using him, Kikyo and Naraku are using him. Kagome is the only one who wants Inuyasha for himself, but he is too foolish to figure it out, or listen to his own heart. Now that her phone is smashed, how is Kagome going to get away from Bankotsu? Will he take her in his arms and try and comfort her after the phone conversation that she just had with Inuyasha? Will Inuyasha figure out where Kagome is, that she's in trouble? What exactly is the plan between Inuyasha and Miroku? Will Kikyo and Naraku get what's coming to them for being such vile people or will they slip through the cracks? What benefits does Sesshomaru get for 'saving' his brother whom he despises? With so many questions, Will 3 chapters be enough to answer them all? Thanks for the update, eagerly awaiting the next 3 chapters.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are getting complicated... feel bad for kagome... she's just clueless with what's happening around her... and now bankotsu is taking advantage of the situation... what is miroku & inuyasha's plan anyway... what will be inuyasha's reaction after the phone call with kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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