| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Title: GGRREEAAATTTT
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 13:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved this chapter. hope you update soon. cant wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2009 20:00 PDT
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This was truly outstanding. I loved the prank Atrius played on everyone to prove his point and I can just imagine that Inuyasha wants brain bleach now to take the visions out of his head. LOL It was interesting to learn about Sesshomaru and the moon but OMG! What happened with Inuyasha? I eagerly await for the next chapter!!
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Title: WHAT!!!!
Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: September 27, 2009 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Did he just turn back into a half demon? What in the world is going on? Is his body going through all of these crazy changes because he is becoming full demon or some type of puberty phase towards a new body form? Here I was thinking it was going to be anticlimactic since there wouldn't be a war, which I so didn't see the new lord of the South appearing. This is whole body changing back is a complete surprise! Atrius and his revenge was pure genius! I was laughing the whole time during those scenes. I'm pretty sure he wont have any more problems. Thank you for the update! I'm taking this as an early birthday gift. As always, I can't wait till the next chapter!
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Title: hey hey hey hey
Reviewed By: ladytokyo aka Shivonne On: September 22, 2009 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there how are you doing? there is another site I think you might like to post this fic up at you might have heard of it. it's for Yaoi only made up by a couple of authors that I have been following around for a few years called the Boiler room and here is the site in case you want to check it out. http://inu-yaoi.net/index.php . I laugh a great deal you can never out prank a fox and that is what happens when you piss off a fox demon. it was just so funny being stuck to a bolder yeah I remember that. and the glue thing that just lol. I was a little well sad that was a bit personal talking about it is just talking but to mess with a mated pair is a bit life threaten. no matter how funny it is. I thought that Inuyasha might have blown up with all that was going on. but it is funny how he had to see the couple try to free themselves and well it was a good exploring at he end eh lol. I really hope that the brothers can get alone now but I can see some hick ups once they have return to the palace and the issue with Rin and Inuyasha. can we see another lemon with the brothers???? they are just so cute together. so boss what's going to happen next with the couple????
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Title: YOU ARE EVIL
Reviewed By: IamJean-ClaudsHumanServantandloveit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 06:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVUS HANGING LIKE THAT!! Is inuyasha going to be okay? Whats up with the hyina guy? All in all great chappy though the cliff hanger is going to have me edgy till the next chappy!
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Title: Great update
Reviewed By: ticktocktick On: September 13, 2009 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, but that was a horrible cliffhanger, how could you?! good humor in this chapter, I thought I would die laughing at Atrius' pranks. Whats happening to poor Inu? I await your next update, hopefully soon ^.^
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Reviewed By: Dashllee On: September 11, 2009 16:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG..........................I THINK IM ABOUT 2 DIE!!!!!!!! U STOP THIS CHAPTHER AT THE MOST UNFAIR CLIFFHANGER I HAVE EVERY SEEN OR HEARD.(this is not a flam btw lol)KK SO I LOVE THE WAY SESSHOMARU WAS ACTING WHEN HE GOT TIERD OF THE MEETING THINGY THEY HAD 2 GO 2, I LOVE LOVE LOVE THE BEGINNING PART WIT INU AND SESSHY. I ALSO SO LOVE... U NO WAT, I JUST LOVE THE WHOLE D**N STORY. LOL I SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOPE I CAN WAIT 4 DA NEXT CHAPPY 2 COME OUT B4 I GO NUTS BECUZ OF SOOOOOOOOOO MANY UNANSWERED QUESTION. SO YEA, NOT TRYING 2 RUSH(or am i?!?) but plzzzzzzzzzz update sooner. i rea;;;y love ur work XDXPXDXPXDXP
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 13:47 PDT
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Great chapter - light and heavy. Please do not make us wait too long to find out what is happening to poor Inu!
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Title: What the heck?
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: September 11, 2009 05:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....and now you totally scares me. *sweatdrop
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Reviewed By: KyouYA On: September 11, 2009 02:38 PDT
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omg! this chapter was so awesome! please the next one SOON (like within the rest of this month or next month plz) This chapter is killing me! inu has something happen and I'm so curious to find out what happens next!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: iron reaper On: September 10, 2009 21:26 PDT
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Wonderful chapter as always but this is BY FAR the biggest cliff-hanger I've seen in a long long time. I really hope the next chapter will be very soon, it seems like you have a good bit planned so I will most diffinetly be checking back very often. Please continue writing whenever possible Your Faithful Reader, Reaper
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Reviewed By: my_perversities On: September 10, 2009 20:45 PDT
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YAY!!! New chapter!! I love you!! Can't wait to see what's happening to Yasha. Is he maturing..so his powers are growing stronger and he's more demon than human and thus can withstand the change???? I'm in suspense!!! Please put those godly hands to good use and type my pretty ^_^ lol
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Reviewed By: Saiba Wolf On: September 10, 2009 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, that was an evil cliffie. Exemplary writing so far though. Definitely a very original idea of an old base plot. I'm especially fond of the length of your posts...though the wait in between them is enjoyably annoying :) Keep up the great work, you have some serious talent!
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Title: Great Addition
Reviewed By: Jessi V On: September 10, 2009 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed this chapter. The spelling needs looking into but it was great. I knew Atrius was behind the pranks. Very clever addition. I look forward to the resolution of this portion of the story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 18:25 PDT
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Brilliant! i love it! especially the Alir Tren part. lol. I love your story its amazing. Its a masterpiece. You are a true genious. also... if you get a chance would you tell me what you think of my new one: An Accomplished End. Its in Yu Yu Hakusho. I have no idea if any one likes it. thanks much. Still going gaga over them being stuck. lol!!!
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