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 Reviewed By: methyl42 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2007 12:47 CDT
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Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I really enjoy reading this story. I realize it takes a lot of time and effort to write. Thank you for writing this story. I hope to read more soon.
 Reviewed By: beth1685 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2007 14:02 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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As always, great chapter, and you've left me wanting more! Like other reviewers have said, I appreciate the fact that Kagome and Sesshoumaru aren't immediately starting to fall in love with eachother like every other fanfic. I always hate reading a fic where the characters ask themselves repeatidly, "why am I thinking of this person? I hate them...But they are attractive...No, I'm not falling in love with her, I'm falling in lust. Why am I thinking about her? I don't like her, do I? No, I'm just attracted to her, so I'll use her for the time being..." and then he precedes to falls in love with her, *very* quickly, because of her firy/fiesty temper. It drives me crazy because instead of showing a growing relationship, and building a solid foundation (of that relationship) with quality writing, authors resort to the cliches and shove down our throats inane inner monologues from the characters that quickly tell how the relationship has progressed. I like your story so much for the simple fact that you *show* the reader what is transpiring, without resorting to the above crap (I know, I ranted, forgive me, :D). That and I do have a soft spot for well-written Sesshoumaru and Kagome fanfiction, :D. In any case, I'm looking forward to more chapters not only to see how Sesshoumaru and Kagome deal with their "relationship" but what happens with her powers as a result of this connection (and his as well), and what happens with the whole serial killer plotline. Can't say enough great things about your story, and i hope you have some spare time over the summer to update.
 Reviewed By: Lil Rin  On: June 25, 2007 21:58 CDT
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It starts out almost cliche, but then you show that you can turn a cliche story into something worth reading. Keep writing.
 Reviewed By: angelickagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 24, 2007 18:55 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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i love it. getting them together, but neither losing their personality and suddenly thinking they love each other. a lot of stories do that, i love the originality of the plot (and that's saying something since it's only on the 3rd chapter) keep it up :D
 Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko  On: June 24, 2007 14:42 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I have been waiting for this chapter for along time. This is a really good story that I have to go back each time and reread it. I hope that another chapter comes out soon so that I can read it. I just can't wait for it to come out. I have been waiting so long just to get a new chapter. I think that this is a very good story and that you continue to write it. Have another chapter soon so that I can read the story again. I'll be checking for that new chapter soon. LOL. Hope Sesshoumaru and Kagome work out there problems and find that killer. I just can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. To see if Kagome has another vision about the killer and what he is looking for. See ya!!!!!!!!!
 Title: Love IT!!
Reviewed By: Kit48  On: June 24, 2007 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story - already added it to my favorites! I can't wait till you update again and give major proops to you and your beta - update soon^_^
 Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2007 12:08 CDT
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Yeah a new chapter! So are Chosen Ones always demons? That might explain why most of the Miko's never find thier Chosen One.
 Reviewed By: beth1685 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 23, 2007 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm speechless. This chapter was just so good! It was well executed, and I thoroughly enjoyed all the amazing descriptions of Sesshoumaru and Kagome's first meeting. I could practically feel everything they were thinking, seeing and feeling. As a writer, you did a excellent job drawing your audience into this story and creating a scene that makes us care about all the characters. The attraction and "bond" between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is so realistic. I wonder where you will take this story next. I can't say enough good things about this chapter, it was excellent. I can't wait to read more, so please update whenever you have the chance, :D.
 Reviewed By: GreenWollf  On: May 19, 2007 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I can undesrstand not being satisfied with how something worked out but I like your story alot so far.
 Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko  On: May 19, 2007 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This story is the best. I have been waiting for the next chapter since I had read it. I don't think that this chapter is bad I really loved it. Though I was left hanging in the end it was good. I read it at least 3 or 4 times waiting for another chapter to show up each time. Thanks for making this chapter longer when you wrote it cause I don't think that I could wait for another chapter if the chapter was short. I do love the sesshomaru and kagome thing. The beginning is what got me hooked on this story. I will be looking for that next chapter. Hope to see it really soon cause I don't think I can wait that long for the next chapter. Keep it up.
 Reviewed By: thyme_cat (not logged-in)  On: March 22, 2007 11:19 CDT
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looking forward to more ^_^
 Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer(logged off)  On: March 19, 2007 09:15 CDT
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:sighs: another beautiful beginning to what will be another beautiful story. you truly have a gift for this. :grins: i can't wait to see how things unfold. and it's good to see that Miroku is still himself. lol anyway, you really are good at with the personalities of the characters and keeping them pretty, ah what's the word i'm looking for, cannon(?). i can't wait for an update, but it's a real pitty that you had to stop your FMA story. :sighs: who knows, maybe you'll get inspired to work on it again :looks at you hopefully: but i digress, keep up the great work on this one and update as soon as you can!
 Reviewed By: methyl42 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2007 17:22 CDT
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I would love to read more. I've enjoyed it thus far.
 Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2007 16:10 CDT
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*grins like an idiot* Another great fic from one of my favourite authors with my favourite pairing? What can I say? Thank you and more please!
 Reviewed By: angelickagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2007 01:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
great storyline so far :D hope you update soon
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