| "Street Dogs" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 09:54 CDT
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woah! it's the past inu! how the hell does he become a dog anyway? update soon
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Reviewed By: Strawberry_chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...so original, kinky, and very well written! I like this a lot and hope you write more soon! I really wanna know what happens next! the end of the first chapter made me laugh my head off.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 17:27 CDT
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Are you kidding me, have I forgotten to review this???! No, must be because the account problem, right? Well, since I am one of the "lost" betas, you KNOW I love it!!! And I'd love to be a beta still...talk about spicing up everyday life...
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Title: "..........."
Reviewed By: TheFabledCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering when someone would write something like this. I thought of something along the lines but never had the guts to put it up here, lol. Good luck on future chapters, and don't let the flames get you down. If they didn't like it they shouldn't have read it, haha! Guess they just can't pull there eyes away from it. ~Arasoi
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Title: THAT WAS AWSOME
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I've been waiting for you to update so I can see what happened. And good job on the whole transforming thing of inuyasha...and I cant wait til you update soon so I can see what h appens in the next chapter!!!!! UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS WAS THE BEST STORY EVER!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i got a little shocked at the beggining but it was great! hm... i wonder what would happen the next chapter... update soon please!!! =)
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Title: Good good
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEW UNDERWEAR PLEASE!!!! *Grin* your doing X-C-LENT!!!!! So keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: BaneOfSociety [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a well done fic, very original (I've read ones where Inuyasha's dog heritage is discussed, but never one with Inu as a dog with sex involved). However, and this is something that really needs to be changed because anatomically it makes no sense, when in the 69 position, Inu's nose would be at Kagome's anus, not her clit. His chin would be the only part of his face near enough to her clit to stimulate it. Potentially, you could just write that his fingers were simulating her clit. Otherwise, it's very well written and enjoyable. Loved the cliffhanger on both chapters.
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Reviewed By: Yvonne On: March 17, 2007 17:19 CDT
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Hmm, so the misunderstanding begins. Naughty Inuyasha...and Kagome, too. Hope you'll provide more background info on these two soon. Still, Kagome does seems to have one hell of a sex drive--hope that's not because she's ovulating cuz then she'd be pregnant with dog Inuyasha's baby. Lol that'd be quite a sight. Well, I'm looking forward to more to "come" (he he) soon!
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Reviewed By: ashfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 15:08 CDT
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hahahahaha loved it plz write more plz
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Reviewed By: babydoll09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it plz continue
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Reviewed By: *drool*lala On: March 16, 2007 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, i wondered why you werent here anymore, happy you reposted, update soon
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Reviewed By: Shiori_Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wird but vary good and suprizingly i want to know what happens next. please up-date soon.
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Reviewed By: @_@ On: March 16, 2007 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh? What happened to all your other comments?
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Reviewed By: Jenns On: March 15, 2007 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very creative. for lack of a better word. haha ;)
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