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Title: Good good
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEW UNDERWEAR PLEASE!!!! *Grin* your doing X-C-LENT!!!!! So keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: BaneOfSociety [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a well done fic, very original (I've read ones where Inuyasha's dog heritage is discussed, but never one with Inu as a dog with sex involved). However, and this is something that really needs to be changed because anatomically it makes no sense, when in the 69 position, Inu's nose would be at Kagome's anus, not her clit. His chin would be the only part of his face near enough to her clit to stimulate it. Potentially, you could just write that his fingers were simulating her clit. Otherwise, it's very well written and enjoyable. Loved the cliffhanger on both chapters.
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Reviewed By: Yvonne On: March 17, 2007 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, so the misunderstanding begins. Naughty Inuyasha...and Kagome, too. Hope you'll provide more background info on these two soon. Still, Kagome does seems to have one hell of a sex drive--hope that's not because she's ovulating cuz then she'd be pregnant with dog Inuyasha's baby. Lol that'd be quite a sight. Well, I'm looking forward to more to "come" (he he) soon!
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Reviewed By: ashfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
hahahahaha loved it plz write more plz
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Reviewed By: babydoll09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it plz continue
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Reviewed By: *drool*lala On: March 16, 2007 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, i wondered why you werent here anymore, happy you reposted, update soon
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Reviewed By: Shiori_Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wird but vary good and suprizingly i want to know what happens next. please up-date soon.
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Reviewed By: @_@ On: March 16, 2007 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh? What happened to all your other comments?
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Reviewed By: Jenns On: March 15, 2007 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very creative. for lack of a better word. haha ;)
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