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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 02:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon!!!!
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Title: I can beta
Reviewed By: nekokyttin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, and your writing style is awesome! I can help with the spelling and grammar, and possibly the sex too, contact me and let me know! Don't want to step on anyone's toes though!
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Reviewed By: Yvonne On: April 25, 2007 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. So they meet again. Heh, Inuyasha is such a horny dog. Does Kagome really only have sex once a month? Maybe that explains the "tight pussy" Inuyasha's addicted to.
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Reviewed By: Sassa, loo lazy to log in On: April 23, 2007 01:20 CDT
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Heh, you really did a number rewiriting it! I like it. The whole jerking off with underwear thing is so perverted - and so NICE! And ooooh, you wanna be unfaithful to me, aw! Am I not enough beta for you?*laughs* I understand you, it's kinda "the more the merrier", right? Since I can't help with grammar and spelling plus there IS a limit even to MY hentai mind (despite everything my boyfriend say) it's quite obvious why you want more betas. Just don't ditch me, 'k? Ganbatte ne!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 23:31 CDT
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Keep it coming this story has got my attention. Is Kagome a nympho or is she just bored and if she is the first can Inu calm her down, well at least after his big head gets deflated. Update Soon.
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Title: UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this sotry was getting intresting.;...... especially with all the cum on kagome and inuyasha doing all that other stuff....*chuckle* hope you update soon because I wanna know how inuyasha and kagome know each other!!!! that was a real cliffy for me!!!!! Update Soon!!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont think you have near enough comments as you should at the moment... so here i am commenting and telling you that i can't wait for you to continue this. with that much sex in the first two chapters, i'm surprised that it isn't a pwp. but it's not like i mind or anything... ;P
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a reminder of my opinion... : ) You know I love this, ne? Just keep em' cum - eh, coming!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 08:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting.... update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yvonne On: March 21, 2007 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh, the plot thickens. So now what is Inu gonna do, search for her? The part about the mediocre sex was funny lol. Kagome was so drunk. Well, hope to see more chapters soon.
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Title: nice story
Reviewed By: adamji On: March 21, 2007 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't go for stories with a lot of sex but ya know, I like this one. It is really a different angle. Hope to read more when you post the next chapter. thanks J
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Reviewed By: babydoll09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey whats she got against dog ears? lol j/k i loved and please continue it was great. oh Street Dogs too if u please.
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 22:39 CDT
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Hawt lemon, although it's kinda OOC for Kag's part. Hahaha... Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shiorinumbuh2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice i wonder what happened to Kagome. hurry and update and its totally fine to damande reviews. you'll get them from me. ipdate soon plz.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 22:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Cant wait to see what happens next. Please update soon
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