| "A Birthday To Remember" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 10:26 CDT
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I just finished reading the whole thing... Its so sweet and tender, with a little bit of funny too... Yu really shulder continue it farther.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 21:17 CDT
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there is some action coming right?? or is it just lovely dovely?? anyways i dont mind what it is.... its just soooooo good!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 19:55 CDT
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this is really good and cute, i wanna know what the marks look like!!! so update soon!!! Please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 16:18 CDT
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Another great story. Love the rearrangement. Have to ask: Will we see Koga? Finish the shards? Tell the parents? Can't wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: Mary_K On: April 09, 2007 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so where is the next chapter? lol
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Reviewed By: Mii-Chan On: April 01, 2007 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very well written and I really love the idea. Well done, and keep those chapters comin'!!! P.S. This is my top favorite of ALL fanfics I've ever read here. Good job!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww thats cute! ^.^ but im hoping theres gunna be abit of action soon ^.^
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Reviewed By: striker123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant wait for more chapters!!! good writing style. work on grammer other than that great work!!
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Reviewed By: foreverremember66 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fic. Creative. You should be proud of yourself. ~Kathryn
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Reviewed By: tgathena [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story so far please update soon :)
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Title: Laughing
Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 15:50 CDT
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Great. i think that the whole mating mark was good and i liked the fact of the whole trail mark and herb potion. all the other authors talk about Inuyasha them. Its good!!
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 12:00 CDT
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I'm enjoying this story very much. The way they both are still so insecure that they can't believe it's real seem s very in character. I can tell that you have more in mind for places to take this story and I eagerly await the next chapter(s). One thing, I noticed there are some typos. Didn't really bother me as I knew what you meant to type and read it that way. But there are some petty fanfic readers who can't seem to get over these things. (Personally, I think it's mostly jealousy that they aren't creative enough to come up with good story lines.) But the point I'm trying to make is that if you need a beta, drop me a line.
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Title: Grinning like a fool
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! That was well written! Keep up the X-C-LENT writing skill!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 19:08 CDT
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This was very sweet. Well written, too.
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