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 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 20, 2007 17:06 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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sano wandered all over japan in his attempt to get stronger as he followed kenshin to kyoto to fight by his side, this was his statement of the esteem he felt for kenshin. one finds it a privelege to recipricate even a fraction of what someone was willing to do/teach. (or in a perfect world that's the way it should be) . . . i can see no disacociative identity disorder in rurouni/kenshin/battousai i see a highly intelligent person who chooses to act in a certain way; passion/strong emotion can change my eye color from gray blue > true blue > aqua- so kenshin's transformation can be easily explained and therefore your characterization of him would definately NOT be OOC. . . never allow anyone to dictate to you as to how canon your characters are or if they may be acting a bit OOC as we all have the ability to act in a variety of ways in the same circumstance, depending on our state of mind and other factors at any given time. always remember: we are but humble tourists inside YOUR imagination... YOU are the guide... and YOU own the ride! . . . a rich and sinful reward for such a beautifully colored and richly textured piece: ::ginny's rum balls:: ~grind up: walnuts, dates, almonds, raisins, pecans, coconut, chocolate chips(lots and lots)...add more sticky dates and raisins if not gooey enough ~mix in: Mini-chocolate chips, 151 proof rum ~roll in ground nuts, cocoa powder, or finely ground coffee(hazelnut coffee is good) . . .because you don't cook them the alcohol is still there... warning: eating too many rum balls will make you drunk >=P ~@~ always a pleasure! ginny
 Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 20, 2007 15:52 EDT
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You know i thought about giving him back and then here you go having him train in just his hakama. Yeah you can have him back but I want him back, so don't put him in the hospital from being over-sexed. I had to stop myself a few times from that. Loved the picking on Sano though. Great!!
 Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2007 21:25 EDT
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Hey a prequel for the story. I sooo wanna take him home. Good job though. Look forward to more.
 Title: kiss and tell?
Reviewed By: Meet.A.L.E.X.  On: April 16, 2007 16:02 EDT
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wow, another cool chapter. i really liked the part where yahiko saw them and regarded them as a 'loving' couple instead of a 'lusty' couple. yahiko shows a bit of wisdom in this chapter, adding in a few weird pubescent thoughts about him and Tsubame :P i loved the interaction between megumi and kaoru and also between kenshin and sanosuke. i just am not sure if i'd regard kenshin as though he was doing the 'kiss and tell' thing... i do not know :P is that really something guys do? -i'm a naive idiot, sorry ~_~''- i'm really asking that by the way :) good luck with writing the next chapter, and again, thanks for updating so fast, i envy you :D
 Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2007 01:45 EDT
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Hahaha. I love this story. It was kinda inevitable that Kaoru would get pregnant, ne? XD Sphygmomanometer. I didn't even know that thing even had a name. It was always 'blood pressure thingy'. That is the word of the day! I love Sanosuke. If my favorite character spot wasnt reserved for Kenshin, Sanosuke would be it. He or Hiko. But anyway. I love it! ~Rosie
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2007 01:14 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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i guess sano would have been the first real male friend that kenshin's ever had, one who he could get a bit boastful with. i find it difficult to think of kenshin being so open but he did let the 'gumi' in on quite a bit of his past and whatever was happening in the present. . . .boys will be boys. ~ a pleasure, ginny
 Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 13, 2007 19:27 EDT
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That was great. Yahiko saw some action and Sano wants details. haha great. THat is great. I hate it though when people walk in but then when you have hte chance to get caught its great.
 Title: yey! new chapter
Reviewed By: Meet.A.L.E.X.  On: April 11, 2007 12:42 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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you really were intent on not keeping us waiting, and for that i am quite grateful -bows- :) hey, can i ask for something? epilogue, epilogue! X3 haha! i mean, if you haven't made one already. is this the last part too? i really like the part where sano and yahiko had themselves almost peeing from fear, karma :P haha! also, the honeymoon jives from people at the aoiya relly would be quite embarrasing for KK :P your story really is amazing, and if i may suggest, you can also post this at FFN without the lemon parts for safety and just tell people to drop by here for the full story :) i just couldn't help but think how many reviews you actually might get having posted it there, i can't even remember my login name here, hence just me putting my nickname :P haha! thank you again and, yep, it was funny (the title) especially with the explanation you just gave. can't argue with the muses :) good luck!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2007 04:00 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lovely reunion with friends... fun and injuries were had by all. i enjoy your humor. . . it's 4am and i can think of nothing else to say so how about we all pretend this was a relavent and stirring review so i can go to sleep now, ne? * sorry about that * reading this has really been a pleasure. ~ thank you, ginny
 Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2007 00:41 EDT
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*Confetti* Yay chapter! mwahaha Poor Sanosuke. And Yahiko. *snickers* Anyway. I can't WAIT to take Japanese. Its going to be in my major somehow in college. My high school doesnt offere anything close at all to Asian studies, so it is kind of depressing. When i can learn Japanese things will be so much fun! Excellent chapter! Happy Writing! ~Rosie
 Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2007 17:04 EDT
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A pregnant girlfriend of mine can't eat chocolate and shes pregnant says it makes her pukie. Well with a child like Kenji anything can make u sick. Loved it and glad they got to pull one on Sano and Yahiko though. that was great.
 Title: really amazing story
Reviewed By: Meet.A.L.E.X.  On: April 09, 2007 11:06 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow! i have to say that i almost didn't read this one because of the weird title (pardon me) and when i did, i had to reread the chapters 1-11 twice. i'm sorry i wasn't able to give out a review sooner, and the ratings i gave your story are not a peace offering too :D they are all true! this was a really great fic and yeah, thanks for the warnings too. man, i'm just stumped at the fact that your fic is almost done before i even had a chance to review :) please do continue and good luck with writing more :) @åO ¡
 Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2007 01:19 EDT
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Yay! Arigatou gozaimasu for the reply! After finishing the series, (i finished Kenshin manga in like a week because I was on Spring break..I lived at borders because there were some no libraries had) and after reading a couple other fanfictions, i realized how pivotal the Japanese is in this story. The ones who use English it gets very annoying with the "That i am" business. It just sounds better in Japanese. And i was proud of me i understood the giant line of swear words at the end. *^^* Happy Writing! ~Rosie
 Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2007 17:44 EDT
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I will definately share. Although he is on the LIST so my husband wont mind. If it makes you feel any better the only sickness I had with my pregnancy was I could not stand the smell of cigerette smoke, long car rides made me nausous (2 hours or more) and I ate alot of chinese food but then again i ALWAYS eat alot of chinese food but it was harder to give me an orgasm. Marathon sex is wonderful when you have time. I became the master of hte quickie. Love the chapter and am glad that Hiko showed also that Kaoru held her own.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2007 13:35 EDT
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that was one of the funniest hiko/kenshin interactions that i've read. goading kenshin almost to violence was something that i had never seen before. quite amusing! ~@~ i am no prude but i avoid overstimulating myself because my husband suffers from side effects of medication for major mental illness, leaving me with few outlets... therefore the need to limit my exposure to certain... stimuli. ~ a true pleasure, ginny
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