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Title: yey! new chapter
Reviewed By: Meet.A.L.E.X. On: April 11, 2007 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really were intent on not keeping us waiting, and for that i am quite grateful -bows- :) hey, can i ask for something? epilogue, epilogue! X3 haha! i mean, if you haven't made one already. is this the last part too? i really like the part where sano and yahiko had themselves almost peeing from fear, karma :P haha! also, the honeymoon jives from people at the aoiya relly would be quite embarrasing for KK :P your story really is amazing, and if i may suggest, you can also post this at FFN without the lemon parts for safety and just tell people to drop by here for the full story :) i just couldn't help but think how many reviews you actually might get having posted it there, i can't even remember my login name here, hence just me putting my nickname :P haha! thank you again and, yep, it was funny (the title) especially with the explanation you just gave. can't argue with the muses :) good luck!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 04:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovely reunion with friends... fun and injuries were had by all. i enjoy your humor. . . it's 4am and i can think of nothing else to say so how about we all pretend this was a relavent and stirring review so i can go to sleep now, ne? * sorry about that * reading this has really been a pleasure. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 00:41 EDT
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*Confetti* Yay chapter! mwahaha Poor Sanosuke. And Yahiko. *snickers* Anyway. I can't WAIT to take Japanese. Its going to be in my major somehow in college. My high school doesnt offere anything close at all to Asian studies, so it is kind of depressing. When i can learn Japanese things will be so much fun! Excellent chapter! Happy Writing! ~Rosie
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 17:04 EDT
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A pregnant girlfriend of mine can't eat chocolate and shes pregnant says it makes her pukie. Well with a child like Kenji anything can make u sick. Loved it and glad they got to pull one on Sano and Yahiko though. that was great.
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Title: really amazing story
Reviewed By: Meet.A.L.E.X. On: April 09, 2007 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i have to say that i almost didn't read this one because of the weird title (pardon me) and when i did, i had to reread the chapters 1-11 twice. i'm sorry i wasn't able to give out a review sooner, and the ratings i gave your story are not a peace offering too :D they are all true! this was a really great fic and yeah, thanks for the warnings too. man, i'm just stumped at the fact that your fic is almost done before i even had a chance to review :) please do continue and good luck with writing more :) @åO ¡
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Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 01:19 EDT
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Yay! Arigatou gozaimasu for the reply! After finishing the series, (i finished Kenshin manga in like a week because I was on Spring break..I lived at borders because there were some no libraries had) and after reading a couple other fanfictions, i realized how pivotal the Japanese is in this story. The ones who use English it gets very annoying with the "That i am" business. It just sounds better in Japanese. And i was proud of me i understood the giant line of swear words at the end. *^^* Happy Writing! ~Rosie
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 17:44 EDT
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I will definately share. Although he is on the LIST so my husband wont mind. If it makes you feel any better the only sickness I had with my pregnancy was I could not stand the smell of cigerette smoke, long car rides made me nausous (2 hours or more) and I ate alot of chinese food but then again i ALWAYS eat alot of chinese food but it was harder to give me an orgasm. Marathon sex is wonderful when you have time. I became the master of hte quickie. Love the chapter and am glad that Hiko showed also that Kaoru held her own.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 13:35 EDT
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that was one of the funniest hiko/kenshin interactions that i've read. goading kenshin almost to violence was something that i had never seen before. quite amusing! ~@~ i am no prude but i avoid overstimulating myself because my husband suffers from side effects of medication for major mental illness, leaving me with few outlets... therefore the need to limit my exposure to certain... stimuli. ~ a true pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 19:41 EDT
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Love it!! I promise to share Kenshin really i will. Sooo can I have him please??? I almost expect Kaoru to be pregnant from all this ...ahem...activity. Can't wait for hte next update either. Keep up the good work. Even if they have to go to Tokyo sometime.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was considerate of you to have a lemon warning. when i beta for my adult-fan-fic authors i usually seperate as follows: first and second base ~lemon warning~ third base and home ~fini~ ... - - good chapters, very nice to have misao and aoshi witness the wedding, and a few jabs at aoshi for amusement. ~ much gratitude ~ ginny
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Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 01:36 EDT
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I love it! I normally don't review on Media-miner *is lazy ^-^* but two chapters in one day! Yay! And such amazing ones at that! *confetti* I'm currently on a Kenshin streak, and i love your stories! ~Rosie
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 17:19 EDT
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Finally married and Kaoru dowsn't look like she knows what hit her. Now we just need Misao and Aoshi! hehehe. Love it
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 03:05 EDT
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i'm pretty surprised that he wasn't the one to bring up the subject of marriage... he is such an honorable and old fashioned guy that i woulda thunk he would've dragged her to the nearest temple or shrine and married her the next morning. ~ happy healthy update reward: ::chocolate coma:: ~ 12 oz silken tofu ~ 12 oz melted chocolate chips ~ whip to a fluffy froth ~ refrigerate till cold ~ yummy! ~ a pleasure, ginny ~ ~ i could offer to beta for you but i have to warn you that i don't do lemons... i skip over them.
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 17:16 EDT
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please let me hit Kaoru over hte head and marry Kenshin in her stead. PLease!!!So is Kaoru going to have any more panic attacks or are we going to wait until Tokyo where there is the possibility Mavis will show up??? I can't wait to see if Kenshin acts different in Tokyo with everyone around. Keep up the good work. This is my favorite story sooo please update soon.
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 16:59 EDT
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God I would love for Kenshin to do that to me. I loved this chapter. I can't see what step u take with there relationship now. Who knows maybe she will even become pg.
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