| "One Night" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 00:40 CDT
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This was a very great story. It was not corny at all maybe a little weird but weird is a good thing. Olny thing is you referred to Yoruichi as cat to much you could never tell if she was Yoruichi-the cat or Yoruichi-the woman, or at least in my opinion anyways. well that is all keep up the good work. ~~Mors
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Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 15:50 CDT
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u r s fuckin genius this wasnt corny at all and i will drop dead if u dont update this i want to know what karins going to do next and what yoruichi does to ichigo when they were talkin bout rape
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Reviewed By: bleachfan On: August 30, 2007 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome not corny at all.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 18:42 CDT
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Corny hell I loved the story and I think Yoruichi is hot and like you called her in the story a goddess hell I would love to read more stories with this pairring
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Reviewed By: Taiyou-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah...hey, whatever you're smoking, I want in. (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 18:56 CDT
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I think it was pretty good, not that corny at all! :)
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