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Reviewed By: Herufaia On: April 07, 2008 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! You have a nice bookish way of writing. The kind that takes you away into book's world. I don't fancy seeing Naruto and Aizen together. for 2 reasons: one it doesn't seem to fit and the second i generally don't like Naruto with any male.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 11:09 CDT
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NOOOOOO you can't put Aizen and Naruto together, it just doesn't work. Anyway awesome chapter I loved the whole Superman reference to the phone booths. Look forward to more updates.
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Reviewed By: Soliderboy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really good update i like it
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Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 15:45 CDT
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the best fucking fanfic with naruto and bleach put together and naruto with yourichi was AWESOME GREAT JOB keep updating i beg of you please
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 16:42 CDT
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that was AWESOME, hehehehe, Oh man, I can't believe how long it has been since I read any Het lemons, LOL...I LOVED it though, really really NICE, and it was just AWESOME over all, the way you made Naruto and Youri THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:23 CDT
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Oh that was AWESOME, I really enjoyed thsi chapter, hehehehe, oh man, but wasn't Tousen one of the bad guys, isn't he the blind dude??? Oh well, can't wait to see what else you are going to do w/everyone, and it will help considerably if they actually have some good suspects THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNED...good. ^^V
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: May 05, 2007 03:18 CDT
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Lol. I love it XD HEhe and not to mention its interesting cos kisuke and yoruichi arent young either though not as old as naruto... hmmm... =D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 09:45 CDT
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why am I thinking, Poor Poor Ishida has no clue what he's getting himself into, MWA HAHAHAHAHA!!! I've no idea but I'm partially thinking that Ishida should be thankful that there are no huge valleys to be thrown into....LOL Can't wait to find out what Naruto has in mind...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Vegito567 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I figure i'll give a full review of just about everything Style 8 : Well, you write in a good style, but I just don't get it off with a paragraph with 2 different people talking, I just find it somewhat hard to read. Spelling and grammer 8/9: I have seen some mistakes but nothing too great. I realize this is un-edited so theres bound to be mistakes, though you could just use the google doc spreadsheets to check for errors ;) Creative 10: Very much so, as I say later in the comment, as this is one of the only fics i've really seen with him traveling from world one to another. I'm sure theres more out there but I haven't read them. Enjoyment 9 : I do find this very enjoyable too read, so enough said eh? Overall 9: Fantastic, even though you don't get many reviews I found it quite good, even great! Good job mate, I just stumbled upon the site from ff.net so your the first fic I've read here, and I must say it's jolly good ;) This is the first fic I believe i've read with Naruto traveling from one world to another, besides a regular crossover so good job indeed. :D And good luck! *fav* And I wonder where he will end up next hmm...And thanks for having MF relations as well as MM :D
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 17:27 CDT
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This chapter rocks can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 00:20 CDT
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that was AWESOME, I really liked it, hehehe, Ichigo is EVIL EVIL I say, and I can so picture Jinta doing that LMAO...but Ururu....hmmm Oh boy, can't wait to see how the talk is going to go... THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:04 CDT
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Coo to t3h upd4t3 z00rz. Heh. Okay, I like the latest chapter, it's cool (and Naruto in a Black Speedo? Yum, though I'm not really into blonds. Oh well. The story rules, and it's just getting more cruel and twisted. I look forward to the next update VERY MUCH! Ok, gotta get some sleep, been up for 36 hours, I am VERY tired. Later
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Reviewed By: SilverShadowKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 18:51 CDT
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Things are becoming interesting. I'm going to assume this is pre-Soul Society, since I haven't seen many notes, but I could have just missed that. Naruto seems to be in an interesting position. Is it possible for Naruto to have a Shinigami for? He's most assuredly strong enough to probably be captain level with his current age. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 15:27 CDT
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LOL, I was wondering how he was going to react to Urahara...LMAO... oh boy, Part of me wishes that Yoruichi would have smacked him just for being so feely touchy on her person, but then she is to cool to let something like that freak her...LMAO I absolutely LOVED Naruto's intro to her....hehehehehehe, I wonder why he didn't offer any help to them, when they brought in Ichigo, oh well, maybe he just doesnt' want to get involved just yet... THANKS:D
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