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Title: More Please
Reviewed By: libertyrjac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 06:56 CDT
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This reads like a beginning, or a small piece of an ongoing story. Is it? Either way I'd like to read more. If it's a beginning though, there's plenty for you to build on. The sister relationship you have with Sango and Kagome is perfect. But, I have so many questions: 1) Explain the snowstorm; Why are all these people trapped? Where's the rescue? If Sango and Kagome can get to them then others should be able to as well. 2) Why don't any of the people seem to suffering (other than hunger) from being trapped all night in the snow? 3) Gotta know who the none-morning-person is? Miroku? Inuyasha? OC? Please write more, I love your writing but I crave more!

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