| "Key Through the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Sailor Light Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 15:20 CDT
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Please update *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story update soon.
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Reviewed By: Umi no Samui [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot. Very creative, I am constantly checking to hopefully find the next chapter. The kingdom hearts soundtrack reference: Utada Hikaru, the artist that composed Passion; and Simplle and Clean, the theims to the games.
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Reviewed By: Burring Truth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way hasn't anyone ever thought of making a cross-over story like this before. I really hope that you keep writing for this story its really good and I would love to see this grow, and become even better.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 08:11 CDT
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It was worth the wait in my eyes. Keep up the great work.
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Title: This.Story.Rocks!!
Reviewed By: Chaos incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great i luv it! ^_^ also the last fluffyish scence with Naruto and Haku was soooooooo CUTE. but one question what are the pairings? if it ain't NaruSaku then who is it? also will Ino becomeing a mage mean she help Naruto later or not? anyways keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 19:57 CDT
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This fic rocks keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Malificent? I would have expected Ansem (the fake, heartless Ansem) to make an appearance first. He is the real villian after all. One more question though. Is Haku going to be a girl in this fic? I hope so. I've always believed it makes more sense that way.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 08:59 CDT
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This story is awsome and it is well writen and true to the story line of both. You really got kingdom hearts down good. Keep up with the great work.
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Reviewed By: EDK On: April 10, 2007 11:14 CDT
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Well, things are really starting to pick up speed now, aren't they?????? What was Naruto sensing; was it the Heartless or something else.... As soon as Kakashi mentioned special trainning, I just knew it was going to be Sexual Education, unfortunally for Sasuke, he was expecting combat trainning (I mean, the guy is so hung up on being the last loyal member of his clan in Kohona, he expects that if his teacher or fellow students have an advantage over him in something (a good example is Rock Lee's hand-to-hand), he needs to learn it (or steal it, oops I mean "copy" it using his Sharingan) and not return the favour just to remain the number one rookie, as if it's his divine right!!!!!! All that status earns you is a big fat bullseye and sign saying "Take me out first please!!!!!".....) What Sakura sees in him, I haven't got a clue!!!!!! Well at least almost all of the people he has met after getting the Keyblade are starting to see Naruto in a better light (Sasuke and Sakura are the two main expections to this fact), why even Ino is starting to warm up to him and is treating him with a bit more respect...... The reference you have Kakashi mention, about the mice on the skate is from Chip & Dale's Rescue Rangers. My request is for maybe a version of Goku referenced by the Ramen shop owner (within a flashback saying that the only other time that was this good for profits was when this wandering stranger who also wore orange or red passed through)...... Keep up the good work and see you on the FanFiction Site!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 07:56 CDT
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I this was awsome. I am writing a chappy in the Z-files with Kingdom Hearts II charaters, lol Keep up with the excelent work.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I love the way this is going. Please update this soon. As for the harem, is it: Sakura, Hinata, Ino, Ayame, Hana (Kiba's sis), Kairi (Just to piss off Riku and Sora), Tenten, and that's all. As for Naru-kun's next keychain, could it resemble Zabuza's sword, just not as big-assed and has more curves? On a side note, I would really enjoy it if you through Haku in the Harem. I love the way you used the Deep Dive. Also, will the Drive forms be the same ones as in KH 2? And can Naru-kun change his physical apperance without goping to other worlds? If you don't know what I'm talking about, it's how Sora changes into a lion in the Pride Lands in KH 2.
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 03:01 CDT
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interesting story so far. Just a few questions: First, will the Disney characters come into direct play in this story? Second, how, if he does, does the Kyuubi affect the story?
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Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!!! also yes you did get tenten, gai, and lee right. tenten is weapon obsessed. and gai and lee are exactly how you made them. can't wait for the next chapter. plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Sharktooth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 04:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a GREAT fanfic PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!!!!!!
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