| "What Would You Do? Part 2" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: SEXY
Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 06, 2009 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story please update soon please!! XOXO
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Reviewed By: sis_101 On: January 29, 2009 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story please please update soon i just love this story so so much!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 04:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice story... enjoyed reading it... good job... great work... until next time...
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Title: HOT!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an great continuation. plezez!!!!!!!!!!! right more i love your writing i feel like im right there experienceing it ur a great writer. update soon!!!!!1 im beging u. *starts crying*
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love this please update soon.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 03:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good two chapters. Actually I would love to see more so maybe in Kagome's time you could have her come to terms with the relationship; but ultimately it would be nice if they can go back to the past. After all with her being a youkai now she will have a long life span and be able to see her family again. Throw in a couple adventures with the lemons and you will have a very interesting story. Just my 2 cents. Keep it up!
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Title: oh
Reviewed By: KAMIS CHIBI TENSHI [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good god were in the world was sess and inu while all of that was going on. good
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Reviewed By: WeekyGuy On: December 16, 2007 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I'm very glad to see you updating again, wonderfully written, your writting style has a wonderful and very descriptive flow, I feel as if im floating through the store and expierencing everything. Keep up the good work. But I Hate You... :)
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Reviewed By: kodiakrdr On: August 05, 2007 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the first chapter. I'm a fool for the chase, and of course the PWP. I'm glad she ran and they're going to pursue. Can't wait to see what Sess and Inu do next, especially after her recent adventure.
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Reviewed By: Li On: June 15, 2007 11:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa, that was hot! YOu writing more? hope so! i'll be checking your profile! Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 18:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
what??? are you going to make us BEG for part 3???!!!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz make the next part soon..... im gonna go crazy if you don't!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: gullycat On: April 07, 2007 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow thats really good i cant wait for the next part! please keep going!
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Reviewed By: kris1038 On: March 28, 2007 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, hope you do a part 3
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Reviewed By: aj On: March 24, 2007 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
please make more chaps i love it.
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