| "Grand Summoning Jutsu" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEET!!!!! I'm giving Kankuro a nickname in my story,too.
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Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was barely able to read chapter 23, due to the stupid blocks my 'rents installed into the computer. But, yeah, I love your story, so update soon, and check outmy story, Mending the Heart. I'm planning on posting it this weekend, so check to see if it's up on Sunday. It will be on Ficwad, too, under 'Naruto'. LOL!!!!
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Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:06 CDT
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P.S. I lick chick fics, especially ones with Gaara-kun in them!(As long as their not to gross.) LOL!
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Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KANKURO'S IN TROUBLE!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!! Kankuro is a perverted baka in your story, but still he is CUTE!!!! Not as cute as Gaara, though. Gomen Kankuro-kun!! He should loose the hat and make-up, though, and just wear a plain black t-shirt like Gaara does, instead of that black robe thingie.
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Title: thank you
Reviewed By: Kaede_Sakaura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 07:37 CDT
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Thank you all for the comments. It does make me feel like I want to extend on the story more. when Gaara takes her back to Sunagakure. I dunno ;o! again, thank you! I know this is a chick fic but meh!
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Title: SWEET & TIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome!!!!!!!!!!!! You are soooooooooo good! And thanx for explaining. I was just a bit confused. i lovve your story. please keep writing them.What happened in chapter 19? My computer woulding let me read it. Please check out my story, Mending the Heart, which shood be posted in a week or so.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 14:49 CDT
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looks like I didn't need to attend a funeral...oh well, I'm still gonna wear black today.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 02:20 CDT
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Don't tell me she's going to fight Gaara...
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Title: 1 more thing
Reviewed By: Kaede_Sakaura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 13:00 CDT
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Gaara is said to be the 3rd carrier of Shukaku soooo I just picked someone random in history to be the 1st host. >.< again sorry for the confusion!
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Title: xD sorry!
Reviewed By: Kaede_Sakaura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 07:22 CDT
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ok, I must have not put a real good discription of what the last chapter was. remember when Maya 1st put Gaara to sleep? where she said she defeated the sand demon once before? chpt 18 is just a flash back of that time, but Maya stealthed (you'll find out in the next one) under a different name, also known as Joan of Arc. O.O sorry for the confusion!
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Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the heck just happened? I am, like, totally confused. Please tell me what is goin' on. Thanx!!
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ I really really like it. I hope that you keep writing on it. I really can't wait for the next chappie!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: TaintedDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really got into your style of writing and the plot is very intersting...I like the charactors definatly Maya because she reminds me of a freind of mine...the only reason you did not get a full ten out of ten is because you put in some of the wrong words like "music to his hears" or something like that but I understand I kind of do that an catch it later (usually ends up with me slapping myself over and over)other than that its perfect (to me at least). Good joob on updating regulary (can't say that for myself) though I kind of have problems getting to the chapters after the seventh one (persiverince {SP} always pervails) :)
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Title: thanks!
Reviewed By: Kaede_Sakaura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 20:23 CDT
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I'm kind of glad people are just reading the story and not Reviewing it, I'm scared of what they might write >.< I know I am not a good writter but it keeps me away from my addiction.... kind of...
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: Temari92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! Nice story!! I really like it!! ^.^
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