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Title: 1 more thing
Reviewed By: Kaede_Sakaura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 13:00 CDT
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Gaara is said to be the 3rd carrier of Shukaku soooo I just picked someone random in history to be the 1st host. >.< again sorry for the confusion!
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Title: xD sorry!
Reviewed By: Kaede_Sakaura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 07:22 CDT
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ok, I must have not put a real good discription of what the last chapter was. remember when Maya 1st put Gaara to sleep? where she said she defeated the sand demon once before? chpt 18 is just a flash back of that time, but Maya stealthed (you'll find out in the next one) under a different name, also known as Joan of Arc. O.O sorry for the confusion!
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Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the heck just happened? I am, like, totally confused. Please tell me what is goin' on. Thanx!!
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ I really really like it. I hope that you keep writing on it. I really can't wait for the next chappie!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: TaintedDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really got into your style of writing and the plot is very intersting...I like the charactors definatly Maya because she reminds me of a freind of mine...the only reason you did not get a full ten out of ten is because you put in some of the wrong words like "music to his hears" or something like that but I understand I kind of do that an catch it later (usually ends up with me slapping myself over and over)other than that its perfect (to me at least). Good joob on updating regulary (can't say that for myself) though I kind of have problems getting to the chapters after the seventh one (persiverince {SP} always pervails) :)
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Title: thanks!
Reviewed By: Kaede_Sakaura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 20:23 CDT
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I'm kind of glad people are just reading the story and not Reviewing it, I'm scared of what they might write >.< I know I am not a good writter but it keeps me away from my addiction.... kind of...
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: Temari92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! Nice story!! I really like it!! ^.^
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