| "Oh, Mr. Sex-ed Teacher!" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2012 23:05 EDT
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You don't know how happy I was to see that you updated this! I had forgotten most of the story line and reread the whole thing. I'm so happy I did. Lol. It was creative and funny in certain parts. My favorite part was when Itachi said, "I taught you that glare." Great story. |
Reviewed By: kitsuyoshi chanuchi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story. can't wait till its finished.
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very smexy!!! I would love it if you continued!!! Sasuke and Naruto's games were very smexy
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Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 11:32 EST
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com on update already do they do it or not
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Reviewed By: serinitycelene On: November 12, 2007 19:14 EST
Comment/Review:
Please write more!!!!! Love the story.
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 20:37 EDT
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You should definitely keep this fic going. I love it sooo much, its great!! lol I love all your stuff and i would like to read more from you
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Reviewed By: narugaa On: July 19, 2007 01:34 EDT
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write more more more more more mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore plz
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Reviewed By: HVFKYH On: June 25, 2007 22:11 EDT
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great fic hope u finish it *puppy dog eyes* and please DON'T MAKE NARUTO CHEAT!!!!!!!!!! i'll cry if u do really i will *sigh* i don't have much of a life
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Reviewed By: kakashi remnant [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 02:00 EDT
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that was great smexy, riviting and among other things
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Title: good
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 01:42 EDT
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wow each chapter just seems to be better than the last
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 16:35 EDT
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damn this is a good fic. i really look forward to reading more of it. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 05:46 EDT
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Love how you end it. I will be waiting.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolute love! As any another lemon lover, I appreciate your great use of SasuNaru goodness. Every chapter was great, and I love the humor you put into it, too. I can just imagine the expression on Kiba's face.. >D Good job!
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Title: beta request
Reviewed By: toaist_boy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 14:36 EDT
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i really couldn't tell you that i'm an expert, but i see lots of potential in your writing. I'm asking you as a fellow lemon freak, could i please assist you with writing in any way i can. If yes than please respond to me. Ttyl. and the idea is so ingenious and not to mention lemony fresh. Sour and tastey!!!!!!!!
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