| "Ah! A demon from God!?" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: MissG [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2012 01:37 EST
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I'm glad that I decided to read this, it's been a great story so far. Really entertaining. I hope that you plan on finishing it because it would be a complete shame not to. Please continue, I would love to see what happens next. |
Title: OMG Response
Reviewed By: SeriyuHellwind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2010 11:25 EDT
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pspmario- Glad you like it so far. I think we all know Bell and K1 will always move at their own pace, though that may be messed with some in the future ;P. The energy converter will certainly be playing a part throughout the next few chapters.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: pspmario On: November 13, 2007 16:37 EST
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dude this is weird but i do have to give some props on the story. Am I weird for asking for more info about the Demonic power converter on the ground, than bell and k-1 love life.
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 05:26 EDT
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love the story so far, cant wait for you give Kei/Belldandy more time together alone, so sweet how you have written each scene between them, good stuff
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Reviewed By: Sango-chan Taijiya On: April 06, 2007 17:58 EDT
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The ending was priceless. Nice foreplay kind of with Urd and Seriyu. That sure got Sayoko out of the bath! Liked the part where the upperclassmen were giving Urd a hard time about a new lover. Overall good..almost kinda a filler but with a lemon in the future who knows...
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Reviewed By: Katie C. On: April 05, 2007 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good I wasn't very familiar with some of the characters and past situations, but that's my fault The introduction of Seriyu is good, it's not too much or too little at once. The date was really cute :D
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Reviewed By: Sango-chan Taijiya On: April 03, 2007 14:17 EDT
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A little confusing around the time of the Demon energy converter thing, but still good. I would try to define more of Seriyu's personality in the next chapter. He is kinda just there and a mystery. Mystery is a good thing but I believe enough time has past for a little more in depth characterization. The flirting with Urd is great! Finally Urd has time for Urd! woot woot!! This fic is coming along very nicely. I understand the situation for an extent but it is still early. Very good. I give it an A! There is only one that got an A+ by me..and that was an amazing story that i dont' think anyone can top. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Sango-chan Taijiya On: April 02, 2007 00:30 EDT
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A successful date between Keiichi and Belldandy. Nice. The introduction of Seriyu was very good. Not over done or under done. It is off to a good start.
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Reviewed By: NoodleFist On: March 29, 2007 21:07 EDT
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Pretty good start, I thought it was very well written and well paced. I also liked the way you handled Bell and Kei's relationship; sweet without being cloying. As for the overall plot, it's too early to really say anything. But as long as this protector being sent to them isn't some angsting, over-powered, blatant self-insert, you'll be fine. I'll look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Sango-chan Taijiya On: March 29, 2007 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm the first one! woot! Well my reasoning is that it isn't too far along to increase the already high ratings! hehe! overall great!
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