| "An Altered Path" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 03:24 CDT
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Both of you stories are good but I am tired of begging you to updated ecause I doubt your going to update any of yor stories anymore so screw it so I am not going to bother looking or getting my hopes up that your going to update when I have a feeling you won`t so oh well to bad both of your stories were good
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Reviewed By: Wither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story, update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 23:57 CDT
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COME ON AND UPDATE EITHER ONE OF YOUR STORIES it is going on alost 2 months since you updated this story and 3 to 4 months since you updated your other story they are both really good stories yes I remember you saying your cat or kitten died that was what sometime in June Iam sorry to sound like an ass but come on and updated yor stories I hate to say it but I have a feeling these stories will never get updated again and I hope that I am wrong and I hate to say it but I am hardly proven wrong when it comes to authors saying they will update when they don`t oh well please prove me wrong and actually updated
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 02:52 CDT
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I am sorry to rush yo but PLEASE HURRY UP AND UPDATE YOUR STORY PLEASE and yes Hinata does need some love but so you should pair her up with Naruto what I voted for and that was frst Saiyuki then Ino and then Hinata since it seem that everybody only wants to see Naruto paired up with Hinata and nobody else its like they think Naruto isn`t good enogh to be paired up with any other girl oh well PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Thunda On: June 07, 2007 16:20 CDT
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Very well done, I should say. Your chapters are long, but thought out, I approve. Now then, in regards of the two votes going on, I think that Hinata needs some love, though Ino comes in a close second. As for his contracts, I think it should be wolves and wolves alone. Having two contracts is just complicating things too much, and very confusing I would think. But that's just me. He should be trained by Jiriya, for pervertedness wins.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 17:04 CDT
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So far I really really like this story I love how Naruto always gets Ginshin in trouble and how he gets back at Naruto lol and about the voting well for the first I vote-Saiyuki then Ino second vote-Wolves and Dragons Thrid vote-Mysterious Kyuutouryuu guy I love wolves and dragons oh yeah and I thought you said there be someting about Naruto`s mother I think her name oh well PLEASE UPDATE SOON or hurry up I cann`t wait to read more of this story
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this flick, probly because of my love of wolves and the Naruto anime. But seriously the mods you make in comparison to the original story are great! 1st Ino 2nd Wolves and Foxes (he is the container for one of the strongest fox demons) 3rd Kouten Hayate
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Reviewed By: Mystic_Rose On: June 04, 2007 04:23 CDT
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First vote-Ino Second vote-Wolves and Dragons Thrid vote-Mysterious Kyuutouryuu guy
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 04:11 CDT
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great story. poll one: naruto and ino poll two: wolves and dragons poll three: Jiraiya
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Reviewed By: Chargos24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Naruto should hook up with Ino next, get a contract with the wolves and pheonixes, and be trained by Jiraiya.
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Reviewed By: Rokubi no Rajuu On: June 03, 2007 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pair Naruto and Ino, also please make the summoning contract wolves and foxes or Demon nine tialed kine ( clan members of the nine tialed fox), finally please let Naruto be trained bt the Mysterious Kyuutouryuu Guy.Also you thought of something no other person has put in Naruto having a player that can have more than one wife Great Job With That!
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Reviewed By: Wanderer of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 18:44 CDT
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Pair Nauto with Ino. also please make Naruto have a summoning contract with wolves and foxes
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Reviewed By: Zvohunter On: May 15, 2007 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha, great story ;) I'm waiting for next chapter. How your story have that little number of revievs ? Geez! This story rocks!
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:06 CDT
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this rocks can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely agree! It is funny when Gishin gets punched by Shinka. Are you going to include that Rekka person in Naruto's harem? Anyways, please include Hana (Kiba's sis if you can't remember) in Naruto's harem early. That would be interesting. I'm glad your updating Sounds of a New Destiny soon I'm very glad that you haven't given up on it. Also, is the harem full of the usual suspects for Naruto? If so, I'd go in this order of affection: Ino, Hana, Sakura, Rekka. I'm looking forward to the continuation of this fic.
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