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| "Midnight Meetings" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 03:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow... I looked at my last comment and was like, "Damn... And I started a fluffy story about them." Hopefully, mine isn't cheesy... Or i'd feel so disappointed in myself. XD And I read this one again for the sake of reading it... And for the sake of the hot, steameh mansex. XD Keep the writing up, and I request that you have a little Axel pedophilia every now and then... You know you love it. ^_~
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... I'm usually a fluuf fan, but I agree with Dark light. There are too many cheesy stories about them... For that couple especially, originality is a huge chunk of your style of writing.
| Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 02:43 CDT
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Wow, you defiantly have a very larg vocabulary, I like when people expand the amount of descriptive words used in fan fics, it really helps to articulate what your saying and leave a lasting impression of the picture you make in the readers mind. This is surly one of the best one-shots I've read in a long time, and I totally agree with you on the matter of too much fluff in AkuRoku, it's cheesiness is truly sickening when people try to embrace their thoughts of a lovey dovey relationship when they can hardly write. So anyway, you've been added to my favorites list and now I'm off to read more of your works, thanx for the great read.
| Title: ::Eats the leamon::
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have been favorite-ed. This is your only warning. . . . but damn do you write some fine one-shots! Oh, and trust me, I've read some really bad lemons, and this was not one of them. And yes, Horny!Seme!Roxas-drive would be 'the sex'. ::Laughs:: Maybe they'll put it into KHII Final Mix--or whatever that deluxe edition coming out in fall--America--with a 3-D remake of CoM is called. Good Luck!! I hope to see more from you.
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