| "Forgotten Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 19:42 CDT
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aw wow. this story seem like its going to be awsome! i hope you continue it. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: I LIKE A LOT On: April 08, 2007 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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THIS IS A GOOD START KEEP IT UP
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Reviewed By: d.l.tokunaga On: April 06, 2007 15:54 CDT
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i´m in germany and i can´´t say much but i will say that the chapts are good so keep writing
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Reviewed By: TaintedDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Confusing at first but I think I understand it now... Very interesting twist in the plot I likey a lot...oh and thanks for your review on my fanfic! Look foward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 21:39 CDT
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nice opening chapters, they asked and answered enough questions so that the reader didn't go "huh? what is this?" but kept enough information so that that reader will want to read more... well done, and thank you for your review... and what you felt is what i live... i wrote that poem for my sister, when she seemed to be having problems with her relationships, so you may or may not feel the same as i did when i wrote it... =p you have a nice story here, you should continue it
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Title: LOVE YA HUN
Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao! I read it i read it! hahahah love it hunnie and please put up the others silly girl. -love your friend angel
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 16:03 CDT
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This story is rated A, but the language that you use would hardly be considered appropriate for all ages. I would suggest either raising the rating or editing the cuss words out of the story.
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Reviewed By: snowdeep On: April 01, 2007 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i read this five times i didnt get it. i got the whole Inuyasha being pinned to the tree then what happened five year old Kagome and Uncle Inuyasha? thats what got me confused other then that i liked it i doesnt help that i dont get half of whats going on but now that i read it i think that new chapters will explain it.
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