| "If Wishes Were Horses" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: ryuzeii On: October 23, 2010 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic is really interesting and intriguing! I really hope that you update/finish this soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Bo On: May 02, 2010 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE UPDATE AGAIN SOOOOOOOOON!!! soooo good of a story~ Can't wait to see where you go with this! UPDATES OON!
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Title: NYA!
Reviewed By: RyuuAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2009 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I just started reading PoT fanfiction a few nights ago (already gone through more stories than I'd like to admit) but so far, this is the best one. Sadly, it looks like its been a while since you've updated. I do hope that you will continue this story, because I'm quite in love with it. I have a love/hate relationship with angst. I'm fighting between: 1) AH! This is awesome! So much food for evil, so much food for Fuji! WAH!!! AND 2) Poor Echizen! Not his mother! NO!!!! She cant have him! Somebody do something! Fuji, kill that bitch's ass! Kaidoh, scare her straight! *coughcough* Anyway, thanks for writing, and please do continue.
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Reviewed By: Naomi01 On: September 17, 2009 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! i really like this story, I hope u continue it. Cant wait untill the next update XD. Good luck with all ur stories.
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Reviewed By: Devil_God On: August 26, 2009 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You fic is quite well written. However, I dislike the format of the last two chapters written. It strains my eyes, and I frequently reread several lines. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there, but I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: mimi4 On: May 27, 2009 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no why did you stop t 6!? it was getting to be realy realy good
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Reviewed By: elex88 On: April 01, 2009 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On ch 5 and 6 someone might have spamed your buetiful writting. a wierd symbol is all over the place and it is imppossible to read demo, 1-4 i cried bt fell in love with the topic.
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Reviewed By: Cay-J [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 07:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! Please continue!! I couldn't find the poll, but I'd do it 25 times!! Anywho, please continue!! Cay-J
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Reviewed By: sa198 On: June 25, 2008 01:36 EDT
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This is a really interesting story so far! I like it a lot! You said there was a poll on your bio, but it's not there...
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Reviewed By: orangeduck On: June 20, 2008 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beyond awesome so far - you are exceeding my previous notions of angst fics (something I am quite fons of) and doing so without an overabundance of DOOM (which is quite the task, you've got Fuji to contend with, kuddos!) keep the grammer the way it is, what you are doing keeps the flow of the story real, nobody speaks (and hopefully thinks) in perfect grammer, thank you for remebering that. many fics of this intent lack that informality and give me a headache so I approve wholeheartedly. I can't wait to see what DOOM Fuji has in store, and Karpuin is utterly adorable!
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Reviewed By: orangeduck On: June 20, 2008 11:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beyond awesome so far, on par and exceding previous notions of great angst fics...I personally love the direct use of "improper" grammer, because it's what makes diologue realistic, something that's hard to remember for some writers - nobody uses perfect grammer when speaking or thinking (I hope!) - keep it up, can't wait to see what Fuji-kun has instore for poor, poor, Rinko. (hehehe)
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Reviewed By: dmennea On: May 10, 2008 01:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do want more of this story i find it enjoyable and very interesting though i am worried about ryoma going to rinko first therefore am highly anticipating next section
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Reviewed By: Blackrose4512 On: March 15, 2008 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story and written nicely. This story has captured my interest and I can not wait to see more! Can't wait for the next update, Blackrose451 (to lazy to log in)
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Reviewed By: ben10 On: December 15, 2007 21:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, this is really good. dude you have got to finish this
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Reviewed By: ilikecheese On: November 23, 2007 09:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought that this was really good! i cant wait until the next chapter.
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