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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: ebi-chan On: December 31, 2007 08:48 EST
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Haven't seen an update and I'm going thru so very tough withdrawls from this story... lol. I just wanted to wish you and your family a belated Happy Holidays, and a Happy New Year. Hopefully you're just busy with holiday crap and once that dies down you'll be back with a kick ass chapter!! Well I'm not gonna beg and plead for a new chapter, I will sit here patiently waiting for a new chapter (while rocking back and forth in the fetal position muttering to myself about dogs). Hope to see a new chapter soon. ~ebi-chan
| Reviewed By: Sabriel8 On: December 15, 2007 03:16 EST
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Ah. I just read this again. And now...I'm twice as anxious for the next chapter. What's going on!! The plot thickens and then...TBC. T_T Anyway...I've always liked the idea that when Hiei and Kagome had kids it'd start with twins. Haha. So random, but it really does fit. It just makes me wonder how things are going to end...and how much longer the fic will be, not that I'm complaining. I'd love for this story to go on and on and on haha. I'm always sad when I reach the end to a great story. Update soon! =]
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I | Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 00:40 EST
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Argh!!! I finally get caught up on your fic and you leave a giant cliffhanger!! A huge twist has come about - even though I wanted it from the start, and she is pregnant! And being violent towards Hiei! OMG! Is she just proving a point, are her celesital powers creating a ruckus, or is she really a killer?? I can't wait to find out! Everything is falling apart at the seams for poor Kagome! Keep up the good work, and update as soon as you can!
| Title: Love
Reviewed By: Nour-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 16:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this fic for a couple of months now but unfortunately, this is the first review I've written! T.T SORRY! I have to say, this has to be one of the Top 5 fics I have ever read in my life! You've introduce me to a whole new genre that I was convinced I hated!!! I truly thaought I hated mystery novels until I read this! For a while this fic consumed my thoughts and while daydreaming at school I would think back to this fic and try and predict what the outcome would be and every Chapter brings new evidnce that I can't wait to discern! I commend you on a job VERY well done! You have succesfully converted me! ^.^ I must also compliment you on your imagination and creativity! I don't think I really could have sat down and thought all of this up while keeping it entertaining, heart-warming and logical. Here's a fic you really have to use some brain power to figure out! And this last Chapter? The ending blew me away! I had my own theories of how the story would end, but that was definitely not one of them! By the way, (un-ending noogies for you for dropping a cliffy like that!) You meanie! T.T Overall, thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us and for entertaining me with such a fascinating and entrancing story. I can't wait for the next chapter! X) Happy and safe holidays to all! Love, Nour-san
| Reviewed By: inuyasha1234 On: November 29, 2007 15:09 EST
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Normally I try to hold back on any negative reviews but (and would like to start this rant off with saying at how wonderful this fic is, getting these reactions from me) but... WHAT THE BLOODY HELL WERE YOU THINKING????? HIEI HAS BEEN THROUGH SO MUCH AND KAGOME JUST REJECTS HIM LIKE THAT?!!?!?!?! I STARTED SCREAMING HER WHILE IN THE SCHOOL LIBRARY READING!! *caughs* Okay, now that I have that off my chest I must say that with the ending of this chapter (WHY THE HELL WOULD SHE GO TO KURAMA??!?!?!? ALL HE'S BEEN DOING IS TRYING TO SPITE SESSHOMRU!!!!!) *glares at my alter-ego, who then shuts up* I probably wont have the ability to read the latest update for a couple of days, needing the time to calm down. Thank you for writing this, it really is beautifully written! IF YOU HURT HIEI ONE MORE TIME I'M GOING TO KILL KAGOME MYSELF!!!! *caughs* Sorry... she's a bit passionate...
| Reviewed By: Ebi-chan On: November 27, 2007 14:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say Happy Belated Thanksgiving (if you clebrate - if not then happy thursday) Can't wait til the next chapter!! Suprisingly I don't have a lot to say... I know you're shocked, I as well... Well hope you and your family are doing fine and hopefully soon we'll have a little e-mail message saying that you updated with another kick-ass chapter!! Well let me go back to my corner now, so I can rock back and forth in the fetal position as I eagerly await the next installment... ~Ebi-chan
| Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 16:43 EST
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madmiko san....you are the master of twists. kagura/kurama is actually starting to grow on me.... any way, i'm looking forward to what Hiei makes of Kagome's other side...it is her other side right?? oh oh!! lemme guess...when she reabsorbed kiki-chan's soul, some of EVeeeeelness went into her....actually, maybe not cuz what about her other demon mates...?? I am so confused....Is it because of her miko heritage? WAAH!!! *hides in a corner* i gotta go read it over!! I LOVE THIS FIC SO FRIGGIN MUCH!!! (another ! just for the hell of it) you are a FANTASTIC writer. I swear, you should really market this cuz some of the fanfics i read are 10x better than some of the crap they sell at bookstores.
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 16:40 EST
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AH!!! I don't know wether to kill you or kidnap you and tie you down until you write the next chapter! AHG!! I loved it so much! Just everything! I had a feeling thaat Kagome had a split personality or some sort. Does a god possess her whenever she get's pregnant? Because he wants to kill off whoever solid her? I don't know! UPDATE!!! NOW!!!
| Reviewed By: Kibble On: November 07, 2007 07:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you SO much for not havig spelling/gramatical errors pop out at me, I've given up reading some fics because of them. To be honest, I didn't think I'd like this fic when I began it, since Kagome was powerful and it was a Kag/Heie. Well, I'd put it off long enough and when I noticed there were so many chapters I took a look. Well, I must say that now I'm looking for more K/H fics and that this fic has been done very well. I like the character development on all parts, and how no one gets left out for long. That's especially difficult since you've gathered so many characters together. Please don't end this fic too soon, I've been enjoying myself very much. :) Oh, and don't kill off Heie, I've just gotten to liking him, and I think he deserves more booty. So be nice :)
| Reviewed By: Kibble On: November 07, 2007 07:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you SO much for not havig spelling/gramatical errors pop out at me, I've given up reading some fics because of them. To be honest, I didn't think I'd like this fic when I began it, since Kagome was powerful and it was a Kag/Heie. Well, I'd put it off long enough and when I noticed there were so many chapters I took a look. Well, I must say that now I'm looking for more K/H fics and that this fic has been done very well. I like the character development on all parts, and how no one gets left out for long. That's especially difficult since you've gathered so many characters together. Please don't end this fic too soon, I've been enjoying myself very much. :) Oh, and don't kill off Heie, I've just gotten to liking him, and I think he deserves more booty. So be nice :)
| Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 19:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I'm back again! ^.^ I couldn't stay away, I had to reread the chapter!!! I just can't get over how you left me hanging with this one...SOOO many unanswered questions and I just can't stop thinking about it! I don't know if she's trying to protect him by attacking him and forcing him away or if she becomes, like, some power-possessed killing machine while she's pregnant. I don't think it's the second one, but wouldn't that be pretty awesome? Would they still sentence her for murder? Maybe just involuntary man-slaughter? Lol! My mind's racing with all the possibilities! I just LOOOVE you and your stories!!! Oooo...I can't wait until you update! Later!
| Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Whoa! Good Gracious of Life! You've just imploded my brain! Whew! Can't do this to Old Farts like me!;) What in Ham's Gravy is going on with Kagome! The battle with Kikyo was awesome! And then Diatano's transformathion! Ba-Dow! I wish I could draw! I would grace you with how much you inspire! Your artist did a speechless job! No words, No words. Just beautiful! I'm sure Hiei was not ready for that! Child! I can't wait for the next installment. I must say this chapter was well worth the wait. Outstanding! Peace!
| Reviewed By: Sabriel8 On: November 01, 2007 21:19 EDT
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I know you've probably read this line a hundred times over but...I can't believe it! Another cliffie?!! Ok. I'm good now. I have to say that the beginning really threw me off balance, it never occured to me that KAGURA would go to Kurama. I have to admit I was really relieved when it wasn't Kagome. On an entirely different note, I think my favorite part in this chapter was when Daitano transformed-- I totally didn't see that coming! And I can't say I'm not happy Kikyo was put to rest because, quite honestly, I don't like her, BUT now that she's gone the mystery really does thicken doesn't it? In the beginning, when I first started to read, I kept waiting for the moment that Kikyo would be discovered because then it would really make Kagome innocent, but now that she's finally here and killed off...well it's just mind-boggling! How are you going to make Kagome innocent now? Is she even innocent? I want to hope that she IS because it just wouldn't be like her to kill off anyone, especially Inuyasha. Crazy~ I hope you get around to updating as fast as you use to because I think if I had to wait as long as I did for this chapter I'd pass out from impatience.
| Reviewed By: ebi-chan On: October 31, 2007 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god... Another cliff hanger... Ugh!! But hey thats ok, it'll just make me go into withdrawals more, hehe. Anyway glad to see you're doing fine and that you came back with another kick ass chapter!!! I was so not expecting it to be Kagura with Kurama (your intention)! And Kag's is pregant - with twins - HOLY ....!!! Now I need to know why she's attacking Hiei - of course you won't tell us til next chapter, but still you got my curiousity peaked. And please don't kill Hiei, please he's too hot to die (not that InuYasha, Seeshoumaru, and Kouga weren't) just think about him and his panties, lol. Glad to see Kikyou is finally gone. Her character always annoyed me (not just in this story but in the anime/manga as well) - 2 down 1 to go. And it's not looking good for Kags since they found her ceremonial dagger in a chest full of poisons - seriously what was that girl thinking by storing them together like that. She might as well have a neon sign around her that says "hey look I killed him". But that's ok I still believe in her, even though she is now attacking Hiei. It's beginning to make me wonder if for some strange reason her miko/celestrial powers are "possessing" her body and making her do that - I mean every time one of her other mates were killed she was with child... Hmmm... you are definitely making my brain work overtime!! I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this chapter - this story just keeps getting better and better. Just when I think I might have figured some of it out, you go in and mix things up!! I love it!! I really won't be able to wait for the next chapter now, lol. So please update as soon as you can - I'm sure I'm not the only Pookie addicted to this story (just look at your reviews!!) Anyways like I said I'm glad things are good with you and your family and I am definitely anticipating the next chapter!! Hurry if you can - but don't rush - besides it doesn't matter if you take forever, I'll wait forever!! hehehe Happy Halloween!!!!
| Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to beat her… she's worrying the crap out of everyone! *smacks own head* omg, Kagome *pokes her arm* Hun, you need to let your sons do this… and I'll give a nice cookie and a gallon of ice cream to make Hiei beg you. And Kurama! *smacks newspaper against hand* You are in for some serious 'No-no' spankings! Wtf?! Sleeping with Kagura? *slap* *slap* *slap* Thinking you'll steal Kagome-chan away from Hiei? *big whack* Being an arrongent turd!! *hit hit hit* *quickly turns away from Kurama* And Daitano, Sassouta, Eishumaru, SHE'S SLEEPING WITH HIEI!!! H-I-E-I!!! Not the dumb fox! *hits Kurama again* I'm still mad at you, you pervert… >,< And, WOO!! Go Zhang!!! You so kick tail! Make Kaggy sleep! :D lol, that made me giggle, and when Hiei distracted himself w/ Yuusuke… Priceless. I so wanted Yuusuke to be all 'Wtf? Hiei, have you been smokin some stuff, b/c ur talkin 2 me' XD LOL!! ---"So soon? That is rather unexpected." Kurama smiled wryly, "I knew you and Yusuke were waiting impatiently to see what we can find out from her, so I presented her with a rather special orchid as a … token of my appreciation. She can always be awakened again." "So hurry up and get your ass down here," Youko grumbled.--- That… I almost died! ROFL!!! *heavy sigh* So much drama… we need a lot of comic relief soon, I swear. Am I going to make a special appearance and just beat people randomly to lighten the heavy mood? XD omg, DARN YOU PLOT BUNNIES!1!! Stupid crack fics, lol. And… AW!! OMG! *clasps hands under chin and giggles* That's so sweet! I luv it! ---Damn it! He was going to kill the fox and the detective, and then use the demi-god's corpse to mop up their blood. They were all working for the kami, and they were conspiring against him!--- Don't blame the kami's Hiei, blame karma… it's come to bite you in the ass for all the times you put Kazuma-kun down *makes tsking sound while wiggling finger in the 'No, no' fashion* ---"I told you he needs a good fuck. Testy little bastard." Youko tch-tched.--- omg, I nearly died again… you have such a way w/ words! XD NOOO!!!! YUKINA-CHAN!!! *sobs* this is horrible! (kinda) Kagome could get killed (not really) and then Hiei would have to shove his sword up Koenma's ass so he could get her back! (I would luv to see that, I would die laughing, I swear to god) I luved the fight scene, but when Kikyou pulled that dirty trick… *growls* I wanted to pop her in the face *angry glare* Poor Hiei, he has to wait longer b/4 he can get w/ his true luv… *snickers* And, good job Kazuma-kun! Keep that faith in Kagome-chan! ---"Hai. In his own bumbling way, he is rather … eloquent."--- *hits Kurama over the head again* T_T your so mean!!!! *drool* *drool* *drool* omg, that was awesome! Yay 4 sex! XD and… twins… *cries* Little hiei demons running around screaming "DEATH TO THE HUMANS" *sniffles* it brings a tear to my eye just thinking about it! *cries in glee* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! DAMN YOU CLIFF HANGER!!!! *sobs* I really enjoyed that chapter, and I hope you can update again soon! *hits Kurama again for good measure* Maybe that'll teach you for the next chapter… I like hitting him, its funny, and I'm glad u find so much enjoyment in it! :D I can't wait until you update! Hope 2 read more from you soon! ---Nanu-chan
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