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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 08:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
plz continue
| Title: Ch. 10
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, I'm so sry I haven't reviewed in like, 4eva! :-( But, I did luv this chapter! :D I just luv that old lady (Genkai) (shudders) It'd be like seeing my grandpa coming out of my grandma's room, in nuthin but a towel… (shudders again) Well, I usually pull up my micro-word window, and write it while skimming over it after I read it, b/c I'm a nerd that way :P Nope, she didn't, and Hiei's bein really possessive! XD Glarin and growlin at everyone that passes by them… Lol! It would, she doesn't miss a thing! That's wats so awesome about the awesome old lady! :D Yay 4 the past! (dances) "concentrate on different parts of it, and interspersed the SDs' comments/realizations throughout the telling" (faints from big word overload) XD Lol, you did do it right though, b/c u freakin kick butt like that! :D Hiei's finally accepting that he might have feelings for Kagome-chan, while she's trying to stop it, very awesome! :D And he was complainin about being called a kitty, and then he called himself a cow… Omg! Hiei's a cow! XD I laugh now! :D And I'm really glad that Kagome's mom's getting her own guy, I really like that. Its really sweet! (giggles while huggling Hiei plushie) Poor Hiei-kun, he blurted out his little secret to Kagome-chan… :-( That's not right, who would throw there son over a mountain? :-( (u won't tell him I said that, right? *shudders*) And Yemon, I knew he was bad news! He's just being used by Ayame! (I never really liked her *angry growl*) But, Kagome-chan's a good person, steering them away from big crowds just to make Hiei-kun more comfortable (giggle) She's so nice! And I knew Kurama was kinky! You're a bad bondage-fox! (grabs rolled up newspaper) :P hehe, but then Kikyou-san had to ruin the whole thing! (growl) She's now a kuromiko? :-( that's really sad… And she's tryin to kill Kagome-chan still! (pout) That's just not right… But it is funny that Hiei's getting jealous! (giggle) "If she started sleepwalking any better than she already does, I'd be taking up residence in the Reikai." Lol, I laugh now! Ahahahaaaa! (is shot) Yay! Awesome lemon! (is still bleeding from head wound) I love how you detail them, and made it so awesome! (jumps around happily) And Hiei then starts to argue w/ her! That's so like him! Rofl! XD "Hell, I should just slit my own throat now and be done with it before you have me needing to keep a pair of your panties in my pocket so I'll have your scent with me wherever I go!" Omg! He stole her undies! (nearly dies laughing) "I was just wondering, if I were to stroke your back, would you purr or moo?" Total gold! ^_^ Ooo, wat did Eishumaru say to Shizuru? Tell me! And, omg, Sesshoumaru?! Wat in the seven hells is he doing back?! I thought he was dead! 0.o Now im confused! You have to update ASAP! What happens next!? -Mee-chan (P.s. omg! This is longer then my usual one! 0.o)
| Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow. That was evil. I mean seriously. IT WAS SESSHOMARU AND YOU LEFT IT OFF THERE???? i mean the writing was beautiful and all...but c'mon!!! I am sobbing as i write this. :)
| Reviewed By: D: On: July 17, 2007 03:02 EDT
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THAT WAS EVIL. EVILEVILEVIL ;w; but great story
| Reviewed By: angie..who? On: July 16, 2007 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh what a cliffy you left!!! I mean come on!!! You totally had me going until that little . hahahah Good chapter, real long, but some how just too short ...err..maybe not...I can't believe Sess is really alive!!! ..or is he?..Now I have 101 questions, lol Well keep them coming.
| Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 11:00 EDT
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omg i have been reading your story for at least a week. took me forever to catch up but know i wish i didnt kuz i have to wait for you to update!! that was so good why did you have to leave it there??? i wonder if it really is sesshoumaru OMG hiei is wathing isnt he??he's gonna be able to see the interaction with them!!!how xould you leave it there of all places!!!! its like watching an anime show when it gets all good and then the ending comes on we dont even get a preview or anything of the next chapter!!! i love the way all your chapters are extremely long. there are sometimes where i think it is a blessing and then i think it to be a curse!! more to read. but then it takes to long to read when i need to finish a story xD. i love the way every once in a while she compares hiei to one of her mates xD. how long do you plan to make the story (chapters). omg its soo good i cant stop thinking about it. lol sometimes i will make up parts to the chapter if i didnt get to finish it and then read the rest when i have the chance but nothing that i came up with never was as satisfying as your story, its so original xD where did you get the inspiration for it?...I have to stope typing lol ir else im afraid i will never stop xD. well i hope that you update soon!!! and keep up the good work!
| Title: You get the 3r's Girl!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is ch. 8: This outting was wonderfully described. It made me feel like I was there. Kagome's mom beau, Great add! Poor Hiei losing his control just can't help himself. Kurama is really pushing it uh? I don't know, but the wolf prince strikes me funny indeed.Iguess I'll have to wait and read on! Ch. 9: WOW! these two (Hiei and Kags) banging every night? I wish my libido worked like that. Good gracious! You are wonderful at writing your lemons. Great details and emotion packed! I love that! I love Shippou you know, I love how he just trip up the other suitors. That's my Kit! I knew Genkai would figure out about our lovers. From what I remembered of the small amount of series I watched, she cracks me up. I'm kind of glad somebody knows though. I got a feeling someone else knows. I'll read on! Peace! Ch. 10: Oh Snap! I love this chap! Kikyo on a rampage, some one should have cracked her clay rear end long ago. I tell you! And Ha! I knew that wolf guy was manure! And what the heck! Sesshomaru! What? You go girl! Damn, I fell out of my chair on that one. Something's up Right? Of course it is! Huh? Yeah? You go on with your bad self! Beautiful! Just Beautiful. Oh-Oh, Hiei! What about him? Ooo-child. Oh wow! I have to wait and wait I shall. With 4 curdmb snatchers, I have to gnash my fangs at them when it's my time so that's why I am reviewing these 3 wonderful chapters together. Now back to my 3r's for you. Ready? You Rock, you Roll, and you RULE!!!!! Peace!
| Title: FREAKIN' AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you've absolutely topped all the other fanfictions! Every chapter you just get better and better! And I DID enjoy the confrontations on this one, though I just wanted to KILL Kurama for being so stupid. How could he tie her to a tree like that!!? And that lemon scene was absolutely wonderful especially the argument! I'm sooo glad he told her that Yukina's his sister cuz I was going completely crazy about that! I hope they actually start kissing in the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: melmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 18:24 EDT
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i'm so happy another chapter is up it keeps my workday very ... tolerable... sometimes i cant finish the chapter at work so i have to read it at home and sometimes i just read the story over again and the next thing i know its 4 am and i ramble when i'm tired but yay! keep up the excellent work hell, i wish i could write half as good as you
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 20:21 EDT
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HOLY SHIT DID I LOVE ALL THEM!!!!! ANd now Sesshy-kun is back?! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: porygon75052 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really live your work i was surprised that your the same author of hentai bets which i read on adultfanfiction which wasnt complete like it was here why dont you add the chapters to there? also i hope that you didnt forget about that chest the yu yu gang found in kagome closet i am really interested in that keep up the great work
| Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 23:42 EDT
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omg i can't wait till the next chapter!!!
| Reviewed By: porygon75052 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic i bet its kikyou who did it are you going to have to put a time skip in there and sometimes i notice that you refre to all three being inu but only two are and one is wolf although wolves, dogs , and foxes all belong to the canine family it dosent really make the dogs only canines anyways put in some more clues please send me areply
| Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 12:57 EDT
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Sesshomaru?!?!??!?!?!? What the hell?!?! What about Hiei?! What's going on?! Gods this is an awsome fic!! please updating again soon!
| Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god I was shock with the lemon but that was great I can't believe you left it on a cliffy Arg!!!!!!!! Please update soon Oh and I hope you get my e-mail I love what you have done with this fic. LOL a cow huh nice very nice, I can't whait to when she sees it is not Sesh but one of Kags sons I think it is just priceless!!!!!!!!!!!
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