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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Title: almost...
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 15:31 EDT
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im almost done with chapter one... it isnt even that good... but major writer's block was present... plus i had finals -_- I HATE EARTH SCIENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Get this: I read chapter nine before i read chapter eight so i was really confused untill i realized that i skipped chappie eight... My life is so tragic!! I loved chapter nine. In fact...i inspired me to go and write some more. All your questions are addressed in my thank you's at the end of chapter one. Wish me good luck! earth science is the worst subject in human schools. I learned 20,000 ways to die. A flood could come and i could die. a hurricane could wipe me out. earthquakes would completely destroy the town. Not to mention tsunamies and water spouts Volcanoes could erupt and kill mass numbers of people. really depressing... AND ITS OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Ch. 6
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 07:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what cracked me up? Yusuke! I love the trick played on him. Good for him. I love your lemons! Very well written as far as I'm concerned and you subjects are amazing together. I can't wait to continue on. Peace!
| Title: Boy What a Proposition! ch. 5
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you're not kidding, but, if I were Hiei, both my demonic energy would go chaotic! Wow that suprised me! Good going! I hit the floor on that one. Great! Going Great! I shall continue! Peace!
| Title: You're Tops ch. 4
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are moving beautifully in your chapters. The flash back are ON "T"! You keep it all real. You have done wonderful. I can't wait to see how this mystery will be solved! Peace!
| Reviewed By: Shadeless Night On: June 16, 2007 13:13 EDT
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Srry for not commenting on ur last chapter - didn't get the chance with everything going on, but it was an awesome along with this one! You can't help but feel sorry for Hiei - he's all confused lol. But at least the detectives finally know about Kikyo now, so they're less in the dark and i definately love how Genkai is suddenly a player with the old men - priceless! I'm still dying to know what the mystery is behind Kagome's mates, *sighs* but i guess i'll have to wait like everyone else ^^ after all the best stories require a good build up right ^^ Anyway thanx again for another update and i cant wait for the next! This story is still my fav!
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 12:20 EDT
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You did wonderful my friend, on this chappie and in the debate. I salute your dedication and your wonderful mind for doing this story. I hope for more soon, lol. Take care.
| Title: Ch. 9
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! They did it, w/o actually doing it! XD hehe, that was good! I luved it! And Kagome-chan is getting worried about they're relationships... but she shouldn't worry, b/c she's getting w/ teh sexy kitsune! XD hehe. And I think it was adorable that you had all teh old geizers hitting on Genkai! Yay for older women! XD hehe. Yemon dissmissed Shippou-chan! XD that was gold! Hehe, he showed him! Did Keiko kick Yuusuke-kun's butt? I would have, after having him tell me i didn't do nuthing around teh house! lol. Aw! Kagome and Shippou spent some quality time together! Its so cute! hehe. " I expect you to be properly adoring -- you may call me Shippou-sama" Pure gold! Poor Hiei, he cant get enough of Kagome! Its freakin hillariuos though (to me anyway XD) W00t! Yukina and Kazuma are getting married! Yay! *dances* thats so awesome! And Kagome still thinks Hiei is in love w/ Yukina... hehe, its kinda funny, since she's gettin jealous over it. Oops, Yemon saw teh bite mark! (XD hiei got mad, didnt he? lol, that was funny! he BIT her! XD) Comparing looks, housing and everything! Lol Its good that Kagome and Genkai get to talk a bit, thats a good thing. ANd Genkai KNOWS!!! Omg! But, it is kinda funny, in an odd sort of way! hehe. Yemon talked w/ Shippou, thats never good. And, wat exatly were the girls talking about when the boys came? (besides sex) hehe, just curious! XD "You wish, Yusuke," Keiko taunted, "Genkai said what you're good for. Eeeeek!" Another golden moment! hehe that was funny! Yay! Teh story was awesome! I luved it! And i usually skim over the whole "Shikon no Tama" legend thing! Hehe, it was FREAKIN SWEET! Finally! Kikyou has been ratted out! Now, they will sent Kikyou to Reikai Prison, give Kagome-chan her soul back, and the story will be over... wait... Teh story will be over! *cries* Wow, u brought Touya into teh story? Hehe, and he gave them some very interesting information for them! :D XD Hiei got her again! XD and He asked her about teh scare, and her soul... How sweet! They had a regular conversation! (well, as normal as they could get anyway) How sad... Hiei wants her scent around him all teh time. Well, he'll just have to mate her now, won't he? hehe, i luv this story! And this awesome chapter! Hehe, it rox! Hope to read more from you soon! -Mee-chan
| Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 10:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter, I enjoyed every minute of it, though it was absolute torture to wait for it! XD I love the slow build on Hiei and Kagome's relationship, I find it kind of funny that it's sorta moving in reverse to how typical relationships work. Instead of "love then sex" it's "sex then love," really interesting! And, now that I'm reviewing, I think that I didn't review the last chapter, which is really sad. So...the last chapter was really great too! lol I can't wait for more!!!
| Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: June 13, 2007 08:08 EDT
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Maa~ Hiei's reaction indeed. A monster chapter is fun to read XD Its long enough now though. Haha, I wonder what Koenma's next action would be when he finds out about the true nature of the quest, with Kikyou and all. Great chapter once again. You brings some light on a boring dull day =]
| Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 14:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear you are like one of the greatest writers I have ever seen!!(or would it be read?) I like this one as much as I liked Hentai Bets! And in a way you just gave me a birthday present because you posted the last chapter on my Birthday! I wonder though.... are you gonna end up writing a woman-to-woman with Kikyo as well? And it's been driving me absolutely crazy...so...please....just have Kagome smack Kurama....just once? cuz he seriously needs to keep his hands to himself!
| Reviewed By: ebi-chan On: June 12, 2007 13:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I have a problem, I think I'm addicted to your story!! Seriously, I've been checking and checking waiting for an update, even though you update a lot faster than most authors. I swear I felt like Pookie(props to you if you know what I'm talking about)going thru his withdrawls! Anyway now that my fix of the week has come,I can function like a normal person(well as normal as I can get anyway). I'm sorry if I'm getting ahead of myself or the story for mentioning the "creepy eye thing" I guess I'm just so excited about this story that I can't help myself =) I loved this chapter, and the interaction between everyone, but most especially between Hiei and Kagome! I love how Hiei is jealous over the attention she gets from her "suitors" but still tries to deny it to himself. I love how he wanted Kurama to stop trying to seduce her 'cuz there's no need since she's gonna deny the wolf, and Youko was like 'Oh, Hell No' I love how he's always second guessing his thoughts on her sincerity - how he thinks that she wanted to go out of her way to find him some ice cream because she's nice and that's just the kind of person she is, to thinking she's only going out of her to sway his thoughts on her innocence or guilt. I can't help it but those moments make me laugh, it's almost like I could imagine Hiei standing there with his one hand on his hip, while his other hand starts to tick off the pros and cons of every little action she does. I guess my head isn't so empty afterall, lol. Anyway since I'm off topic and rambling yet again I will just get down to saying I LOVE this fic, and eagerly anticipate the next chapter. Basically I will be rocking in a corner while shaking profously until I can get my next fix!! So please update as soon as you can - oh and I'd really love to see those outakes on the stuff you deleted 'cuz Hiei was being OOC!! Anyway thanks for the great read!! ~Ebi-chan
| Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 09:45 EDT
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Nothing is more annoying than someone saying 'I told you so' and I'm sure that is being done in spades. It was a great chapter and just what I needed after a long weekend. The poor guys now have a third woman to look for! Hope you update soon!
| Title: Ch6
Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 07:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*chokes,gasps, dies* Dear kami poor idiot detective. How the heck do you always manage something like THAT trick when i have a mouthful of tea?! Seriously, its at least the second time you've gotten me like that on one of your stories. Kudos
| Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 21:35 EDT
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wow, Hiei...im surprised he remembered and stopped...it was still hott! Shippo is so awesome! making himself seem like a serious courter... now im SO curious to see if kagura really did have sesshy's son...the description fits...but, i dont know if i could see sesshy doing that... and now kikyou's comming! damm...next few chappies will be crazy!
| Reviewed By: MarieC On: June 11, 2007 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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so kagome was dreaming of hiei instead of reality but anyway plz continue
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