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Title: Ch. 7
Reviewed By: HalfBlackWolfDemon (nli) On: May 20, 2007 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! i luved it! and i think i know who killed Kagome-chan's mates! XD its kikyou! it has 2 be, all three of then had their souls purified, inuyasha was stuck to a tree as a human... but how did kagome get sessoumaru-kuns blood and stuff underneath her nails? i am still figuring that out. lol, i luved it so much! and my favorite part in there was uhm... hm... so many, but i also wonder who was it that saw Kagome and Hiei gettin it on... i think maybe it was Shippou-chan, but im dont know... *ponders* anyhoo, i hope update this wonderful fiction! Mee-chan
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?!?!?! how can you end a chapter like that?!?! omg, that was a great chapter! the SD's found so much information out! and it's kikyou isn't it? shes the one who killed her mates? and she's still alive and has like absorbed their souls! AWWWW!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!!!!! and Hiei and Kagome are getting pretty cloes...^_^ thats cute..he's falling for her! oh and for the overall rating, if there was one, i would give you an 11!
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Title: Hola from BD!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 16:20 EDT
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The yuyu hakusho story is up!! pairings are (but not final): Keiko/Yusuke Hiei/Botan Kurama/OC Koenma/OC Kuwabara...i'll get to that any suggestions?? by the way...update soon!! :) hehe
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Reviewed By: Who Am I? On: May 17, 2007 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love It...So Now That They Know About Kikyo Excuse Me Lady Kikyo They Think That Kagome Stole Another Persons Mate Well 3 Others...I Wonder When They're Going To Get Thw Full Story Of The Great Quest...There Is Still So Much They Don't Know...You Have To Love Kuwabara Always Believing In The Good Of People...It Seems That Hiei Is Starting To Think Of Kagome More Than Just A Lover And The Same Goes For Kagome...I Have An Idea Who The Man Was That Spread The Ashes Was But Im Not Going To Say Anything Just Yet...Now That Kagura Shows Up How Will The Relationship Between The 2 Of Them Be?? I Mean Kagura Felt That Sesshomaru Should've Been Hers But He Wanted Kagome...Is She Going To TRY And Kill Kagome...I Have A Guess On How Her Mates Died...First It Was Kikyo Mad At Inuyasha For Not Going To Hell With Her And Going With Kagome...Then When Kags Got Wit Sesshomaru Kagura And Kikyo Teamed Up To Kill Him...Lastly With Kouga All Three Females Banned Together...Now They Just Live To Make Kagomes Life A Living Hell..Well Am I Right?? Keep Up The Good Work You Are A VERY Talented Writer!! Cannot Wait Till The Next Chapter Is Posted...Dont Keep Us Waiting For Long!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadeless Night On: May 16, 2007 18:20 EDT
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Well what can i say - except that you were once again able to come out with an incredible chapter! - leaving me convinced that you are indeed the "master of cliffhangers" (hehe). But i dont mind - keeps me coming back for every update that much sooner ^^ I love how no one even considers Hiei as a threat for winnign Kagome - although i understand why - but the irony is just so much fun read!! Can't wait for your next update!!^^
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you are sooo cool!!!!! thanx for the lemons!
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 19:22 EDT
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I love your disclaimer!......is Kikyo still alive? OH OH OH!!!!!!!KAGURA.....oi...I'm over here panicing!ahhh oohhhh oofff!!!OH I KNOW!!!! Naraku is actally aliv e and Kikyo helped him kill the others along with Ayame but Kagura is there to warn kagome andandandand...i dont know.....eh...See you in your next WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!!! WHOO HOOOO!
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Reviewed By: dadada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 19:04 EDT
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Update soon!!! I love it so far!
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 18:18 EDT
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I think all little girls are spoiled! I've already recieved several packages from my grandmother and a friend of mine and my sister is already shopping. I loved the chapter, and I think this cliff hanger was worse! They know about Kikiyo, but they don't know she is a Miko and now Kagura shows up! The length was great, and I found when the guys found out about jilted lover number three rather amusing. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 17:47 EDT
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AH! You should be ashamed of yourself! Oh well! Kagura is here! Oh no! GAHHHH!!! She's not goingt to kill Kagome is she? She owes Kagome her life!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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plz continue
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 15:06 EDT
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I feel so horrible; taking so long between my chapters while you keep pelting out the home runs! ^_^ I love the subtle evolvement of their relationship and the way you're easing into his change of heart over her guilt. (And don't worry; I've started on one of those you asked for...going slowly, though...)
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 14:28 EDT
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im starting to feel like kikyou, kagura, and ayame all worked together in their deaths...but i cant see any of them being able to kill sesshoumaru...kouga seems to get distrated easily, and inu was human, so...theyre deaths is understandable...but im also thinking its someone else, and the 3 are just to sidetrack us...i love how hiei and kagomes relationship is evolving! now what was kagura doing there? and what kind of talk do they have to have??? good cliffie you left us with! very nice long chappie, it was deff worth the wait! Happy mothers day to you too!
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its interesting to watch Hiei and Kagome's relationship evolve and the information regarding Inuyasha's death is certainly intriguing. Could Kagura be there to cause trouble? Hehe, can't wait for the next chapter, excellent as usual. Ja.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 12:50 EDT
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I sure will continue to enjoy it if you keep up with the excellent writing!!!!!! This is just getting so good . . . the pieces of evidence aren't that good in my mind though, to convict her, but that might be because I have my own ideas . . . And what a cliffie! Excellent . . . Hoping for more ASAP. But take your time and make it good.
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