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Reviewed By: Viento [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2010 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLEASE!! 3 YEARS WITHOUT AN UPDATE FOR SUCH AN AWESOME STORY IS WAY TOO LONG!!
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Reviewed By: Viento [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 11:35 CDT
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A friend once told me that a great story isn't written by a person, the story writes itself and the person just puts it on paper. I've found that she's absolutely correct on that matter. She was also an awesome writer.
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Reviewed By: Viento [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! You haven't updated this story in over 2 years and I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude up until this last chapter I was very inpressed without proper spacing it looks like you were being lazy. other than that great fic.
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Reviewed By: Jacque On: June 28, 2009 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update Iloved this story and I still do but you abanoned it! bring it back!!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 21:42 CST
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Hmm, love the story as always, but why the lack of updates as of late? The stories you write are incredible, but you've had a long drought of updatage, it's a bit dishearening. Mind doing something to change that? Thanks. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: LancerLead [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 17:02 CDT
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Great Story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 11:35 CDT
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Damn, I absolutely love this story (it's hot and kinky as hell) but I haven't seen an update myself in half a year or more! Maybe that's because I never put this on my watch list, or maybe because my watch list is a piece of crap. Oh well, either way, it's sucked for a bit. Anyway, I do think that Itachi's injuries can add an interesting twist to events, potentially. Think about this, if Itachi needs Tsunade level medical treatment, it'd be a true 3 way fight for her skills, to heal Itachi to full strength, the regeneration of Orochimaru's arms, and the Konoha nins seeking her help. Heh, between all of these, it could be real interesting. I do think though that Haku's powers are increasing in foresight, perhaps you're making her into an oracle? Ad for that matter, what about Hinata? She has nearly achieved angelic status, but who will teach her to become a true angel herself, or better yet, what will be required for the Tsume (sp?) to grant her her first wing? Neh, just some idle thoughts. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: BloodLord
Reviewed By: Levi C. Diffee On: February 19, 2008 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good Job! The Fighting Scenes Are inspiring Me (I have thousands of inspirations for a noval Im making) On a totaly differnat subject: More Lesbian Action would be good! "Drools" Ps. Nobody is more perverted than me!
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Title: Super-Sweet Fun-Time!
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this Story. I've actually read it twice within the past three days, that's how good it is. While the misspelling does hurt my eyes, I find that you this is my single most favorite story, followed by the Mallorean, Hinata's Secret Life, A Boy Who Love's His Work (Chaoswizkid mentioned it), and the Belgariad. The Mallorean and Belgariad are two 5-book series by David Eddings that center around Garion/Belgarion. Runner ups include the Enchanted Forest Chronicles (Can't remember the author... Louis Carol?), The Prydain Chronicles (Lloyd Alexander), The Westmark Trilogy (Lloyd Alexander also), and Xanth (Forgot the Author's name, damnit). The Mallorean, Belgariad, Prydain, and Westmark are all well written and I have read them multiple times. Would you find it creepy if someone sent via UPS a box full of cookies? I don't actually understand the internet lingo that you mean when people say you deserve cookies since I was told that a cookie was a fragment put into your computer so that your internet provider can send ads that relate to the things you look up. Oh well. I also have my own story here on MediaMiner. It's called 'The Flame of Youth', and I hope that when I finish it it will compare to your fic. Oddly enough, Gai and Lee have less to do with the story than in your fic, but the name has three meanings to me. First, it is Gai and Lee's Philosophy. Second, it is a song by dragonforce (British Speed Metal, look it up). And third, my modified character, the Dark Heart (his title/nickname, since I prefer people to not know his real name since he is a character known to those that read or watch Naruto), developed a technique similar to Kaioken from Dragon Ball Z called the Flame of Youth Jutsu. It's sweet because it physically converts the body into chakra, and all you need to use it is a Taijutsu of 100%, and can be used by anyone, even those who can't use chakra, like Lee! oh well, don't meen to rant, so hope to see more chapters. Keep on Fluffin' your Garfield (Oddly enough, no one knows what that means, and likely it isn't even sexual!)
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Title: Neo Tenro
Reviewed By: Neo Tenro [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 08:49 CST
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how should I say this your fanfic is Amazing on how ya did it, I'm also Surprised on who gets whith who, on that note when's the nexts chapter getting here?
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Reviewed By: Saxyguy On: September 10, 2007 00:02 CDT
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Yo! love the story just wanted to know how many tails everyone is up to by now. just my curious nature. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Berserker_leviathan On: September 02, 2007 23:33 CDT
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Are you going to make Hinata a Kitsune since you just needed a angelic item?
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 02:29 CDT
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Well this new chapter was good but it kinda sucks that Kiba one of my less ppl I like well he is far better than Sasuke but what I think sucks is he gets to be paired up with Temari that and Naruto is only going to be paired up with only Haku and Hinata lol ok let that Mut I mean Kiba have that very HOT Temari and all but I think it would be funnier if Naruto gets to have Kiba`s sister Hana oh well its your story so the annoying Kiba gets one of the hotest girls oh well please update soon and keep up the good work oh and sorry for my complainning
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 14:51 CDT
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That chapter I thought kicked ass hell it might be cool if they could make Lee into a demon as well because Lee is cool ok so what will happen to that damn Sasuke oh yeah and thank you for ot going into full detail with the fight why I say that is because well to me they get really boring when you have to keep reading and reading about one fight so thank you againanyways keep up the great work on both your stories
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 03:26 CDT
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I love the story but I hate to say it and I bet you already know unless it is just me but this chapter here on MediaMiner isn`t complete well I did finish reading it on AFF.net oh yeah I have 2 quesiton and another idea of another person to add to Naruto`s fun and that person is Hana Kiba`s older sister I don`t know if she is aready in your plans with the story or not I just thought about bring her up oh and here are my questions 1. is I thought on that damn FF.net site sory I jst hate that site since I am on webtv and that site desn`t work for me mainly it won`t let me switch chapters so I can only read chapter one and thats it since it won`t lt me switch ok back to the question I didn`t know you can write lemons on that site I tought if you want to write lemons you come here and AFF ok that is question 1 now question 2 lol will Naruto have sex with either Miko or Anko sorry I just had to ask anyways please update soon again and keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 20:52 CDT
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ShikaKin? I didn't see that one coming, although I think I should have. I like it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Train1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jo man! I really like your story...I'd say I LOVE your stor...keep on writing, the story content hentai, romance, action and everything...It's great...I'v just started reading and I can't stop so I 've read it in one rush...great... Your Idea with the Kitsune is great...Naruto isn't so idiotic and just paly the nope!?! Thats great...like I said bevore I REALY LOVE READING YOU STRORY!! So keep on and make your way...^^
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 21:27 CDT
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Thak you for that great chapter I am very very happy that you are back working on your story so that mean finally there will actually be a good hell a great story that will actually be updated anyways I love the story and I agree with Unkown-nn936 about bring Kin to the good side and with Tsunade have her and Shizune join the clan Tsunade can be with Miko and Anko and have Shizune wth Naruto,Haku and Hinata hell Tsunade always wants to be look young so have her join the clan so she can actually look young well thats just an idea ad yeah the hell with Sakura oh yeah by the way what about Sasuke I hate the guy but wouldn`t he be Naruto`s cousin and wasn`t Miko going to try an remove the curse seal on himoh well please update soon and keep up the great work and welcome back
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Reviewed By: Chaoswizkid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 14:25 CDT
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Alright everyone, let's begin the Ode to Zendura. He's brought us an amazing fanfiction, in which I'd pay money to read. Since he wants cookies, heres what the Ode is like... *hands Zendura a cookie* Now lets see how many cookies Zendura can get before his next chapter! Come on! By the way Zendura, welcome back, and please, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Unkown-nin936 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well with what you said about kin supposed to seduce shika well why not have shika turn kin good you know a whole plan gets backfired kind of thing. as for the harems additions ill say every girl/woman (including tsunade, but she stays with the adults) except for sakura.
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Reviewed By: Callidus On: July 22, 2007 06:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic, I'm really enjoying it. Great story line and well put together. Hope your move goes well and your internet is back up soon, I just can't wait for the next chapter *8->
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 17:04 CDT
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Come on and please update I miss miss reading your story I know moving kinda sucks oh well I guess I have to keep looking to find any other good stories out there and then wait forever to see if they will update
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 03:16 CDT
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I hope you get your internet soon so you could update sorry if sounds like I am complainning but it is boring because I have been looking for good stories bt really long hoping by the time I am done reading them some of te stories I have been read would actually get updated but it looks like the damn authors oh those stories just up and stoped writing so I have been waiting and hoping someday smeone would upate and I cann`t go to that sorry to say that god damn FF.net site man I hate that site I hate to say I wish that site gets a very bad virus were it would crash the whole site to the point where there have to build a new one but thats just me sorry for rambling but I do hope that you get your internet soon so you could update this great story
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 11:51 CDT
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COOL!!! *Transforms into Chibi Gai* "Another awesome chapter of this super fanfic! Behold, the FLAMES OF YOUTH!!!" *Transforms back to normal* Well, I wasn't gonna go into that whole Gai-Lee Thing. *shudders* Scary. Okay, awesome to see more of this story, and I very much look forward to the next chapter, whenever that next is. Sorry to hear about your internet problems, that happens to the best of us. Still, update soon as you can, and we'll keep reading. Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: daranman On: May 06, 2007 22:12 CDT
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nice chapters, but 14 needs formating.
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 20:58 CDT
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Shika as a main character? An interesting choice. Just don't do ShikaTema. If you do I'll be forced to stop readong this fic on principle. There are few het pairings I object to as much as that one. It makes no sense. If anyone should be with Temari, it should be Naruto.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 19:46 CDT
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This chapter was pretty the lemon was hotbut it sucks that Haku can go around and have with others but Naruto is pretty much stuck with Hinata and Haku oh well and I say oh well that Naruto won`t get some of Miko but I wouldn`t doubt Haku will so oh well the story is still good anyways so keep up the good work and update soon
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Reviewed By: Chaoswizkid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 15:43 CDT
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As for the poll, I choose both... Japanese, but with an English translation in parenthesis after. By the way, what's the full name of the website with the alternate ritual thing? This is still one of the best stories I've ever read, with a plotline to make a whole seperate anime for. Sometimes I wish I had a team of animators/drawers so I could tell them to make hentai manga/anime... So many good movies to make... Keep up the good work... and the update speed! It's nice to have access to the next chapter within days, something other fics have left me wanting for.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 19:32 CDT
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I thought chapter 14 was pretty good and I kinda thought it sucked that Naruto taught Miko that so she can transform into a guy or something like that I think it would have been even cooler if Naruto was the one to give a child so I take it Naruto is ONLY going to be having sex just with Haku and Hinata and not with Miko or Anko and I have a feeling Miko and maybe Anko will get together with Haku well I am happy that there teammate died that was cool yawns with Naruto not getting any of Miko oh well keep up the good work and update soon sorry to say this but with chater 14 I had a hell of a time finding where the story started at
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