| "A Sad Live Deserves More" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chaoswizkid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 15:25 EDT
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Alright everyone, let's begin the Ode to Zendura. He's brought us an amazing fanfiction, in which I'd pay money to read. Since he wants cookies, heres what the Ode is like... *hands Zendura a cookie* Now lets see how many cookies Zendura can get before his next chapter! Come on! By the way Zendura, welcome back, and please, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Unkown-nin936 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 14:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well with what you said about kin supposed to seduce shika well why not have shika turn kin good you know a whole plan gets backfired kind of thing. as for the harems additions ill say every girl/woman (including tsunade, but she stays with the adults) except for sakura.
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Reviewed By: Callidus On: July 22, 2007 07:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic, I'm really enjoying it. Great story line and well put together. Hope your move goes well and your internet is back up soon, I just can't wait for the next chapter *8->
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 18:04 EDT
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Come on and please update I miss miss reading your story I know moving kinda sucks oh well I guess I have to keep looking to find any other good stories out there and then wait forever to see if they will update
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 04:16 EDT
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I hope you get your internet soon so you could update sorry if sounds like I am complainning but it is boring because I have been looking for good stories bt really long hoping by the time I am done reading them some of te stories I have been read would actually get updated but it looks like the damn authors oh those stories just up and stoped writing so I have been waiting and hoping someday smeone would upate and I cann`t go to that sorry to say that god damn FF.net site man I hate that site I hate to say I wish that site gets a very bad virus were it would crash the whole site to the point where there have to build a new one but thats just me sorry for rambling but I do hope that you get your internet soon so you could update this great story
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 12:51 EDT
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COOL!!! *Transforms into Chibi Gai* "Another awesome chapter of this super fanfic! Behold, the FLAMES OF YOUTH!!!" *Transforms back to normal* Well, I wasn't gonna go into that whole Gai-Lee Thing. *shudders* Scary. Okay, awesome to see more of this story, and I very much look forward to the next chapter, whenever that next is. Sorry to hear about your internet problems, that happens to the best of us. Still, update soon as you can, and we'll keep reading. Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: daranman On: May 06, 2007 23:12 EDT
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nice chapters, but 14 needs formating.
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 21:58 EDT
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Shika as a main character? An interesting choice. Just don't do ShikaTema. If you do I'll be forced to stop readong this fic on principle. There are few het pairings I object to as much as that one. It makes no sense. If anyone should be with Temari, it should be Naruto.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 20:46 EDT
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This chapter was pretty the lemon was hotbut it sucks that Haku can go around and have with others but Naruto is pretty much stuck with Hinata and Haku oh well and I say oh well that Naruto won`t get some of Miko but I wouldn`t doubt Haku will so oh well the story is still good anyways so keep up the good work and update soon
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Reviewed By: Chaoswizkid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 16:43 EDT
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As for the poll, I choose both... Japanese, but with an English translation in parenthesis after. By the way, what's the full name of the website with the alternate ritual thing? This is still one of the best stories I've ever read, with a plotline to make a whole seperate anime for. Sometimes I wish I had a team of animators/drawers so I could tell them to make hentai manga/anime... So many good movies to make... Keep up the good work... and the update speed! It's nice to have access to the next chapter within days, something other fics have left me wanting for.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 20:32 EDT
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I thought chapter 14 was pretty good and I kinda thought it sucked that Naruto taught Miko that so she can transform into a guy or something like that I think it would have been even cooler if Naruto was the one to give a child so I take it Naruto is ONLY going to be having sex just with Haku and Hinata and not with Miko or Anko and I have a feeling Miko and maybe Anko will get together with Haku well I am happy that there teammate died that was cool yawns with Naruto not getting any of Miko oh well keep up the good work and update soon sorry to say this but with chater 14 I had a hell of a time finding where the story started at
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Reviewed By: daranman On: May 01, 2007 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 13 needs formating. Other than that it's a pretty good read.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 18:36 EDT
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I lked this chapter I really liked how you shorten each fight instead of going on and on and on about the same fight to me that is kinda boring I usually scroll past them ok so when will Naruto bring Ino in to join them and when will Miko and Haku go at it sence you have it that she wants Miko more and Miko want Haku instead of Naruto to me it seems Anko is the only who really wants Naruto between her and Miko oh well as long as Naruto is lol gets some lovingso please update soon
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 16:34 EDT
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Hell yeah I'm pushing for Temari! Along with FemHaku and Ayame, she's my favorite girl for Naruto. I'll keep asking for her until either she dies or...well, actually, I think that's the only way you'll get me to stop. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 23:21 EDT
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Not much of a fan of that kinky stuff Anko and that fox girl did, but I think it worked here. Update soon. P.S. Still hoping Temari becomes part of Naruto's harem.
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