| "Pain and Healing" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Darkspinesonic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 14:01 CDT
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ooohhhh whats itachi going to do.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 02:27 CDT
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Come on and update the story it is really good but I have a feeling that it won`t be updated anytime soon hell I always love to be proven wrong but sometimes I am not wrong SO PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 13:28 CDT
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Amazing, its hard to find stories that have this level of creativity. This is one of the few that is completely original and an idea for the storyline that I've never seen before.
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the chapter. the only thing i saw that needs correcting is the spelling of dose it should be does
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Reviewed By: Gizmo2.0 On: May 28, 2007 15:52 CDT
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Very good update plz
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 03:26 CDT
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Heck after reading this story the only ting I can say is I love it and I am not really a big fan of Naruto and Sakura pairring but atleast its different than always seeing Naruto and Hinata pairring and that pairring I love but it seems everybody only wants to see naruto paired up with her than anybody else and if they do pair Naruto with somebody else they screw it up by pairring him up with a guy ewww oppps sorry for rambling but I want to say I love this story and I think it is way better than Revelations Of The Mind that was to stor I talked about in my last review anyways please update soon and please and I mean please don`t take another month or two just to update it is really good so please update SOON and keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 01:17 CDT
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Heck I read a story on AFF.net called Revelations Of The Mind and in that story the author had Shizune as Naruto`s mother and in that story Naruto and Sakura were in love he saves her by giving her one of his kidneys and by doing that something happens to her and they both become part of the fox demon clan but the damn autor up and stoped writing the story I hate then they do that
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 07:26 CDT
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One word 'Wow' don't think I've read a more creative naruto fanfic then this really like it and hope to read more.
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Title: Original, Creative, & Interesting
Reviewed By: Kingkakashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good story, very original. I really liked the use you did with multiple characters. I was considering using Shizune as Naruto's long lost mother at some point in the future chapters of my story, but you beat me to the punch. I guess I'll have to rethink that or maybe I'll still do it with a twist? Please keep writing additioanl chapters. It is a very interesting read without a doubt.
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Reviewed By: kunaiswarm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting shadow7. I was completely caught by surprise when you said that Shizune was Naruto's mother. It was quite an interesting read. It seemed like any old NaruxSasu fic I've read but when you did the whole demon link thing the story really picked up. I liked it a lot and hope to see more of your work in the future.
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