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Reviewed By: Pimp Starwind On: October 12, 2002 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wnated to say you have an extremely good fic!!! So I was just hoping you can write some more. |
Reviewed By: Starwake321 On: September 29, 2002 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you don't keep writing I'm afraid I'll have to "persuade" you >:( |
Reviewed By: vegetakaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue you lazy person! |
Reviewed By: SSJ3GOKU On: July 17, 2002 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT I NEVER COMMITTED A CRIME IN MY LIFE. I SAVE PEOPLE AND I SAVE THE PLANET OF EARTH AND THIS IS ALL I GET FOR IT. Well anyway how the hell did she get data on Saiyans and they were supposed to be Extinct. And please im tired of hearing about goku and ryoko....make up another couple if you can. |
Reviewed By: Kioko On: June 28, 2002 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you discribe Ryoko, and Ayeka. I am an Ayeka fan but I also love Ryoko...One without the other, the idea just seems awful, don't you think so too?
In a lot of stories that I have read they put either Ayeka or Ryoko WAY out of character, but you have managed to capture the real personalities of both of these amazing characters,
CONGRATES!
Please update soon!
And if you can read my DBZ/Tenchi crossover on Fanfiction.net!
There are two other people with my screen name, so I'll give you a few distinguishing characteristics about my bio:
I have 3 stories out and here are there titles:
"Alone"-(DBZ)
"If You're Not There" -(the Tenchi/DBZ crossover)
"Trapped"-(BIG Crossover) |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: June 15, 2002 09:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
MUSTHAVEMOREMUSTHAVEMORE!MUST!HAVE!MMMMOOOORRRRREEE!
ok baibai,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Rika On: June 15, 2002 00:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
That wasn't flaming. Like I said before in the first review, I ****like**** this story, not hate it. If your talking about my comment about Ryoohki's name, I thought you misspelled it accidently. How was I supposed to know you did it on purpose. Your the first author I heard of doing that. I was commenting on the fact that it wasn't fair that Ayeka was planning on trying to turn in Gokou for unknown crimes, just because he's a saiyan. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: GODLA On: June 10, 2002 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! It is totally awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next! This is very exicting and interesting! You're a very talented writer! The characters are so realistic even though the situations are extremally creative! Later |
Reviewed By: Rika On: June 08, 2002 23:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh come on! Ayeka can't really be planning on bringing Gokou and Vegita in on charges for crimes against the universe. 1. unlike Veggi-head, Gokou's never commited a mass murdering crime in his entire immortal life so this really isn't fair if he's winds up getting charged for the crimes his ancestors did; 2. The Saiyan race has been legally dead for hundreds of years, so how can they still have all that data on them after all this time? |
Reviewed By: Rika On: June 08, 2002 23:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's good you should continue it. But you spelled the cabbit's name wrong. Her name is 'Ryo'ohki, not 'Rho'ohki... |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
What?! Goku and Ryoko again? Damn! |
Reviewed By: veggie's girl On: June 06, 2002 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
KEEP ON WRITING...OR ELSE... |
Reviewed By: duo barton On: June 06, 2002 01:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue soon |
Reviewed By: pilot 05 On: June 06, 2002 01:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue asap |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, who's the couple here? To be perfectly honest, I don't like Goku. So...how about Vegeta and Ryoko? Please?! |
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