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Reviewed By: Assan On: February 02, 2010 14:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What an intense chapter! I love the way you put your characters! Instead of being preoccupied with all the drama at hand they have human feelings too! And human dillemas like your phone dying! PLease update soon!
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Reviewed By: vintageazalea On: February 02, 2010 05:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read up to this chapter so far, but oh my goodness, let me tell you, I'm SO glad you built up their characters, backgrounds, and attitudes to such a point that when they finally met, it was absolutely explosive. Talk about fireworks! And I'm all for anger and arguing, because that's how they really are, and I honestly do think they turn each other on by making the other livid. In other words, I ENJOYED READING THIS so very much. You write very, very well, and I can't wait to read the rest of this story. THANK YOU for building up the tension and (not-yet) romance and not bringing them together justlikethat, like too many fanfics do. All your readers will definitely appreciate the buildup and the love story. I can't wait to read! You're fantastic!! p.s. - I loved the chapter when Kagome and Sango were singing along to Alanis. Jagged Little Pill is the ultimate breakup album, you feel so invigorated afterwards.
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Reviewed By: Edwardsgirl On: February 02, 2010 05:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading this! OMG I did not expect this to happen. It is so sad that Kagome and InuYasha must suffer like that! I even felt sad for Yuka to die! Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Kori_chan On: February 02, 2010 05:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story made me cry and laugh, and sob again! This chapter just made me sob so hard, I can't believe what's happening! I hope they get better soon! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Dexter90 On: February 01, 2010 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful and delightful, and slightly twisted. I enjoyed reading this so much, I think I will go reread it again! I hope I will read something new soon!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Devilishdream On: February 01, 2010 12:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter.. it left me so thirsty for more!!!! crazy cliffhanger!! cant wait for another update!! your amazing!
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Reviewed By: LucyC On: January 31, 2010 22:59 PST
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Will InuYasha get better? I hope so! He can't die! Please update soon!
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Title: I LOVE THIS
Reviewed By: Animegirl90 On: January 31, 2010 21:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This cannot be happening! Another amazing amazing chapter! I cannot wait for more! Please update soon!
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Title: What a great story!
Reviewed By: Ari-chan On: January 31, 2010 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome, she's not even concious! She can't even defend herself! And all those injuries, ugh how will they tell what happened to her! Since she won't know what happened! I hope Ayame and Hakkaku can get there in time!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: KoriL On: January 31, 2010 09:18 PST
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You can't just leave us hanging on the edge like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is amazing, please tell us what happens next! PLEAAAAAAAAAASEW
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Reviewed By: Dreamer1234567 On: January 30, 2010 23:54 PST
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OH MY GOD NO!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!!! please please please update soon!!!! this is such a great story!!!! ive spent the majority of three days reading this, the plot totally just sucked me in! i know its a great story when that happens, but PLEASE update soon, I REALLY hope there is a happy ending coming with this!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ninjamonkeyspy On: January 30, 2010 22:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! When I started it, I was not expecting this. Actually I thought pretty much it would be the same old story, but I am so freaking glad it wasn't! I love it, love it love it!
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Title: WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hotsttuff_90 On: January 30, 2010 22:22 PST
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THIS IS SO INTENTSE< I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE YOU!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Laila On: January 30, 2010 20:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is amazing! I am so glad I stumbled upon it! I read through this thing in a day! It's purely addicting! I can't stop reading it! I can't stop thinking of how all of this will pan outs, and how everyone is going to react to this! It's kind of funny though that it's mostly InuYasha's fault that Kagome is hurt that much. If he would not have impulsively mated with her, Kagome would not have been in so much trouble! She probably would not even be hurt! Most likely Kouga would have just tried to get her back, and get in bed with her. And Kagome probably would have played smart and somehow gotten out of it. Or played along and somehow gotten out, or had a way to contact InuYasha. But instead she's know been over drugged, and then chemically poisoned, and then savagly beaten, and chocked to death. While she is not able to even defend herself! And once InuYasha sees her again, in her condition he's probably going to realize it was his fault! Poor thing! And also he could have stopped her from going! Or better yet just come along with her, there's nothing bad about it! Or at least find out where she was going! Well I can't wait for more, this was really amazing! I will keep coming back to read more! Who wouldn't? Lol!
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Title: Great stuff!
Reviewed By: Sarika On: January 28, 2010 20:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, I never even have heard of InuYasha or Kagome before. I never even read fan fiction before, lol. But this has to be one of the most amazing things i have ever read in my life! This should be a movie or a tv show! I can't believe what is happening! This can't happen! I think she will get rescued by the name of your next chapter! But still how will Inuyasha respond to Kagome looking like that! She must look like a plum! Poor thing! She did not deserve it! But you know who the hell leaves their drink at the bar, with a crazy ex boyfriend! And then drinks from it again! Really??????? First rule of drinking: never drink what you didn't see poured. Rule two: never leave your drink alone! Please update soon! I cannot wait for more~
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