| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 01:23 PST
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Another amazing chapter! Thanks. =] Have you considered updating the summary of your story? It doesn't do justice to this epic.
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Reviewed By: Animegirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 19:37 PST
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please update soon i need more info im gonna jukp outta my socks if i dont get more info!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gods... *whistles*... that was way more intense than I was expecting. Her being mated was both a good thing and a bad thing, because it bought her some time before being raped while he was busy freaking out over her scent, but what ended up happening as a result was also a fear of mine, that he would ultimately end up just deciding to kill her. Man, a youkai pounding on a human like that? I doubt you honestly intend to kill Kagome off after everything she and Inuyasha (and we as readers) have been through, but how could she honestly survive such a thing? Maybe...because they are clearly linked as Inuyasha can feel what is happening to her...maybe she will be able to gain his strength somehow in order to heal faster? Either that, or like somebody already said, if Sesshoumaru happens to have Tenseiga...which I don't think I recall any mention of off the top of my head. Oh man oh man. And you definitely built up to the prospect of her getting rescued at the last moment with Ayame and Hakkaku rushing to the cabin, but now the chapter title for the next upcoming chapter has me worried that something will end up happening to one of them after they save Kagome and nobody will end up knowing how or who saved her. I hope that's not the case and that Ayame and Hakkaku can try and repair what's left of their own lives after everything is said and done. Man…this is totally not how I had envisioned this chapter playing out. I was picturing her coming to, and Kouga confronting her about being mated…letting that cat out of the bag…and then I was picturing more of a violent beating/rape when she got rescued. I am seriously on pins and needles awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 14:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok... I just caught up on the story and... Holy crap. For one I didn't know you can have such a twisted plot, I mean I know you're good but damn you just prooved me wrong, you're GREAT. And as for the characters, Koga my god man didn't know he was just a body of sick. Just a walking, talking sickness of rage, evil and above all monster. For Kagome PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE don't let it be what I just predicted that might or will happen. Same for Inuyasha too. Dear lord this just gotten sick yet in a good way. I hope you keep it up and update soon. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 23:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAARRRRrrrrrrrggggg.....I hate cliffhangers!!!! Please, please update as soon as possible!!! This chapter was so intense! Please don't let her die...I'll cry...I really will...T_T
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 23:12 PST
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Oh NOOOOOOOO!!! That is just a horrible way to end it ... argh!!!! You making me cry like a baby here. It seems that Kagome is not going to be able to recover from the things that are being done to her and maybe not Inu either. I will be waiting for the next chapter ... hopefully for some relief from this lack of knowing what is going to happen.
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Reviewed By: Ravens_Ashs On: January 24, 2010 19:48 PST
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OMG...This chapter was soooooooooo intense!!! I have to believe that you are so heartless as to leave us with this cliffhanger for another month. We, your fans, IMPLORE YOU to update your story as soon as you possibly can. We all know that Kagome and Inuyasha can't die, but this is killing US!!! Please, please, please update soon. I love this story and cry a little bit everyday that I don't see an update. Keep up the great work. Many hugs.
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 17:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is devastating!!! Damn you Kouga!!! This is such an intense fic.... You're awesome! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 16:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Plz he has to save her! Omg I'm starting to cry lol. Its good but plz update!!!!!!!!
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Title: Darn it!!
Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 15:54 PST
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Please hurray and save Kagome!!!
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Title: How could you!!
Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 24, 2010 15:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you!!! Now, why would you leave us with this ending?!! You are killing us with the suspence here!! You must do a very quick update; now that you had done this to us. Preferably tomorrow. ^_^ Great chapter, and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! why do u do this to me? I was sooo excited for something good to happen... but nothing good happend!!!!! things got worse! gawwwwww! im depressed! :*( im crying a little inside.
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Title: Cold ending
Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 24, 2010 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOW!!!!!!! I thought this chapter involving Kagome's "friend" was so cold and so well written I actually felt sorry for her. I do not know if Sess has his legendary sword on him in this story, but I think that's the only way they will get answers. I going to read your latest chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: fudge On: January 24, 2010 13:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is going to kill me!!! i hooope you update very soon, keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 13:32 PST
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Holy crap! That was so violent! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha. *sobs* I want Kouga dead. D-E-A-D, dead! *sobs again*
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