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| "the love of a half demon" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAARRGGHH, just when I was getting all into it. Geez, you writers sure know how to keep us readers in suspense. Really liking the story, so I hope to see an update soon.
| Reviewed By: heather! On: April 16, 2007 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this one keep adding on i can't wait till the next chapters!!!! good jobbb
| Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok if they don't have sex let them makeout and let inu tell her about his haratige ok keep writing thanx bye
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work so far. I look forward to the next installment. How amusingly ironic; a suggestion for proofreading, and correcting errors, made by someone who neither proofread, nor corrected any errors, herself. I digress. The fact of the matter is, nobody is flawless, and everyone is perfectly capable of making mistakes, gods know, myself included. Do not allow what you may perceive as negative feedback to deter you in your work, as while it is true that some typos exist, they in no way detract from the story, at least for myself. I certainly hope that you will receive additional reviews, so that you may see that I am not alone in my opinion. Though granted, it would certainly behoove you to acquire a beta, it is only because you have developed an excellent plotline, and I wish merely for your potential masterpiece to achieve perfection. I sincerely hope that you continue with this story.
| Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 01:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
The plot seems good, but first thing you need to prof-read or get a beta, there are a few small errors which can be correct easily. Secondly, your sentences seem short and choppy, if that makes any sense, I'm not too sure. Keep up the good work!
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