Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I like the fic. But you need to know a few things, Tania was after Bastion first then Jaden. Could you have Bastion in the next chapter with out getting him killed? Cause I really like Bastion.