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| "Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 09:32 CDT
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Nice chapter, I liked every part of it and I think it came through nicely. Sure, there weren't any real steamy moments nor grand fights but you can't have that in every chapter. This way we get a logical explanation as to how Seto ends up in Joey's house. I loved the last part where Bakura summoned Yami, both for their reactions as for the fact he could actually still summon others, it must be a boost to his confidence in some way. I am eagerly awaiting humour and angst in the coming chapters.
| Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nooo don't leave (pout) do you have to leave. switching topics i was right! not right often. bye
| Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: July 09, 2007 20:22 CDT
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First, I have to comment on your artwork! Very nicely done! I also view Ryou as being older, more mature. I think that you have captured his innocence yet playfulness in your rendition of him. And, as for the other bit of artwork... whew! Yummy, indeed! Now... onto the story! Poor Bakura! Angels and demons alike are popping out of the woodwork(!) and it seems that Bakura and his situation are at the heart of it all. Lucky him! (Note the sarcasm!) Bakura's reaction to Yami's sudden appearance was perfect. Seto's reaction? Priceless! "You!" - hissing and all! I could actually hear it! Seto's little pissy taunts meant to hurt Bakura really sounded more like something that one would expect from a demon instead of a heavenly being, let alone God's Avenger - and not to mention how childish it truly was. I loved Marik's entrance! I also loved the fact that Marik has some sort of blackmailing trash on Seto! How the hell funny is that!?! Gabriel is a lovely character. He is another calming influence to Bakura it seems and one who has stood by the wingless angel and still cheers for him. God is amused? I found that... well... amusing! As was Gabriel "laying down the law" so to speak. Akeifa is becoming more mysterious. Oh, and Marik's little side quest to visit with Malik... the temptatin was too strong, wasn't it? Good chapter!
| Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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what are you going to do with Seto? anything to do with Joey? Yami, Seto, and Marik were so funny, they didn't even notice Gabriel, so funny. pulls out Yugi's puppydog eyes please get the next chapter up soon.
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 23:59 CDT
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^_^ I like Gabriel - there's just something about him that's really interesting and cool. He definitely deserves more lines! And more appearances! But I REALLY liked the giant fight that could threaten to destroy half the earth and cover the other half in darkness. It's just so funny XD... Anyway, will there be anymore Malik/Marik moments? Currently, the only thing I have drawn related to the story is that pairing, and it looks good, so I might try more M/M moments (I don't know why, but Ryou/Bakura just isn't inspiring enough, and the drawings don't look as good). Well, keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 05:56 CDT
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oooh, great chapter ^_^. Seto finally got put in his place and good. I thought is was important how Bakura reacted to both Marik and Yami when they entered. No foul scowling face but laughter and a somewhat parental exasperated attitude as the three started bickering. It shows how he's making progress and Ryou calms him down, as before he'd growl at anything even daring to come close. The dimension part was nice and Gabriel's interference and his dialogue with Bakura was important, he knows he's not alone even if he still seems peeved, can't blame the poor guy. Now Marik is getting really into it with Malik and Akeifa is becoming more interesting to read about with every chapter, he's one of my favorite characters, I simply must know his secret.
| Reviewed By: sglily - nli apparently On: July 02, 2007 20:08 CDT
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I really liked Ryou's interspective as his thoughts fell on Bakura, describing the feelings he had at first for the elder as a crush and then quickly realizing that what they had, and what was developing was so much more than a case of adolescent puppy love - not love but there was always that possibility. See, it's all those little details as Ryou woke up and started his day that make a good enough story a great story! I for one appreciate the time and effort put in to flesh the story out. If ever there was a stormy relationship, Bakura and Seto would take the prize at the moment! Depending on which way the wind blows they are either barely civil or near to pummeling each other to death! If ever Bakura needed the calming influence of Ryou's aura... yeah. And, once again, Ryou and Bakura "meet" through the phone call with one under duress! I loved how Ryou inadvertently managed to derail Bakura there with the little comment about fantasies... ah, if only Ryou knew, eh? ; ) The whole scene at Ryou's apartment was so well done. It was light and funny, serious when need be. The whole conversation surrounding Akeifa was perfect and perfectly timed. Ryou's conclusion, "You love him," struck right to the heart of the matter. Bakura's explanation was as forthright as he could be - kudos to Bakura for being brutally honest in a roundabout sort of way! And, I see you gave into my deman- uh, I mean you granted my wish (request?) yeah, to see some Ryou/Bakura goodness! Loved it! Fluffy you may call it but hot it 'twas! Get Seto the hell out of Bakura's apartment already! I WANT MORE GOODNESS! ; ) (See, you give a little and the demanding reader wants more!)
| Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah fluffy moments, and nicknames. can't wait for the next chapter
| Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: July 01, 2007 12:21 CDT
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Oooh, another great chapter, long too. The bickering and all between Bakura and Seto is getting funnier by the chapter...oh, how I love Seto's reaction to the TV *snigger* what would happen if you introduced him to the internet I wonder? The phone call was nice too, somehow he seems to be in contact with Ryou a lot after his angelic/fallen friends managed to wind him up. The fluff was very fluffy and very sweet and it was good that you brought up the Akeifa issue. Though I wonder how dramatically Bakura's redemption is going to be if it involves parting with Ryou, I had wondered before about that, good that you made that reference and didn't drown in the fluff completely.
| Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: June 28, 2007 18:26 CDT
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You know, I really, really, really feel for Bakura. How many endless years did he trudge and toil on Earth, pretty much left alone to his own devices - and not really for the better, and now, all of a sudden he has become like a magnet for all things complicated - some good, some questionable but with some revelance to his own redemption. Regardless, his "dealings" with Seto should earn Bakura some brownie points with God. By all rights, Bakura owes Seto nothing, and, to be quite honest, it took a hell of a lot of balls on Seto's part to show up at Bakura's in the first place. He's lucky he didn't get tossed out on his self-righteous ass! The whole confrontation between Bakura and Seto was on the mark. But, the showdown I want to read is between Yami and Seto... this coming from one who has those Ryou/Bakura blinders on! And, on that note, I demand some R/B goodness in the next chapter! ; )
| Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the pics and Seto's hissyfit, at least he knew Bakura was right. next chapter soon please. i'm not above begging
| Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: June 25, 2007 04:11 CDT
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now, before I get on with a review that is somewhat coherent: and a fucking huge sword… which by the way is that compensating for anything? *collapses in a sniggering fit* Oh, that was just priceless, though I don't think Seto completely got the point. Anyway, I particularly loved this chapter. The 'lessons' were hysterical and it was nice to see Seto warming up, in Bakura's presence no less. And another nasty, low blow regarding the loss of Bakura's wings. But...he handles himself well. Ryou is doing Bakura's temper a lot of good and it resulted in him putting Seto in his place. I really liked the argument they had and Seto, in his own special way, admitting that Bakura had a point. I liked the last part, it seems like Dartz to sell his soul, doesn't it? During their conversation the part I liked best was where Yami looked out over the city and watched the souls he fought for evidently with warm feelings in his heart. I loved this chapter, though I can't wait until Ryou picks up that phone and dials that number! For that matter, I want to see how Ryou handles Seto and Marik when the time comes.
| Reviewed By: sglily - apparently nli and too lazy to do so On: June 17, 2007 19:18 CDT
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Wow. When Marik is pissed... he's pissed! I loved the first section. The colorful metaphors used to describe Seto were hysterical! In fact, Marik rarely used the Avenger's name period, did he? ; ) For some reason, I'm really glad that you had Yugi be the first one that Ryou "faced". Even though all three of the friends had been guilty at least a little of overstepping their boundaries with concern to Ryou's privacy - even with Ryou's best interest in mind - Yugi had been thoroughly railroaded by Malik. I also liked the Malik/Marik showdown! It wasn't confusing at all! The difference is temperments and personalities really shined here - Ryou and Bakura's relationship is slow, almost cautious, and suits the two involved. It is nothing like the fast, all-out kind of thrill seeking event that Malik has fallen victim to all too willingly. Yami chastisizing THE devil? I found that last section amusing as well! Great job!
| Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 13:18 CDT
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please do write the sex scence. i thought it was nicely ironic that Ryou went to Maliks house to apoligise to find himself being thanked. can't wait for the next one.
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 07:24 CDT
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nice chapter. I liked how pissed of Marik was and the aftermath of his little 'outing' with Malik should indeed cause a truckload of chaos. The scene as you described it between Malik and Marik was very hot though I was surprised to see him interested in sex like that, but hey, I'm not complaining. Ryou was all about the forgiving and forgetting again too, just as we know and love him. Awaiting the next chapter eagerly as always
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